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11/24/19, 9:35 PM
I'm so excited to know what the boss has in store for the fraternity and what his ultimate plan is. Just a bit of a critique, I wish we could've seen more of Brent's sadistic mind get played out on Tanner more. But I enjoyed the mind control aspect, how thoroughly planned the take down was and liked the mind control sprays that PB was using. It's always a pleasant surprise to see your story updates on this site! Please keep writing, and keep em coming. cI'm a huge fan!
ForgottenCradle
11/24/19, 8:50 PM
I will be so sad when it ends,really. I fell in love with this series
Nephilim
11/24/19, 8:26 PM
I loved this story from first to last chapter. Nice writing, good ideas, very kinky concepts. Thank you.
Nov 24, 2019
11/24/19, 6:56 PM
If you like possession, I do have an idea. Nerd walks into an alley and gets possessed by the spirit of a dead Jock. Nerd notices that he was having dreams of things he knew he would have never done, for example akin to working out, sports and being a dumb jock. Each day is a progressive transformation and he connects the dots that the dreams are changing his body and mind. He was losing interest in nerdy stuff and had almost joined the jocks. To fight it, he learns Lucid Dreaming and ends up uniting both aspects into one.
El_Cazador
11/24/19, 6:01 PM
Me gustó mucho la historia, tal es charle no este interesado en tom de manera amorosa pero hacerlo pasar situaciones vergonzosas podría ser muy interesante
Nov 24, 2019
Anonymous
11/24/19, 3:13 PM
Incredible. This is why I cum here. Thank you.
Aug 5, 2014
11/24/19, 1:46 PM
love hear an eager bottoms thoughts
11/24/19, 1:43 PM
> Even the unbelievable parts were believable enough that it was erotic! > Wait... there's something unbelievable in the premise? STOP IT!!! That's why we suspend our disbelief when we enter the world of erotic fiction/ mind control/ muscle growth, because at face value, it's just ridiculous -- although to be honest, I wouldn't mind having nip suckers like these... just sayin'.
11/24/19, 9:17 AM
i enjoyed this! i always look forward to your stories!
Anonymous
11/24/19, 6:27 AM
so fucking hot! I need more! I love a hairy daddy