Recent Comments

Anonymous
11/17/19, 5:12 PM
Each chapter as good as the previous. They are fairly short, but that keeps us eager to read more! Really nice work. Thank you. I wish my name was Jake!
Anonymous
11/17/19, 3:57 PM
Excellent
LongtimeFan
11/17/19, 3:09 PM
I always know something amazing in store when a new Derek Williams story shows up--and you KILLED IT on this one! The mental transformation, the description of each guy changing into a mindless musclehead despite their different body types, the casual use of "we" until the reader realizes WHY it's all first-person plural...all brilliant. Thank you! :D
11/17/19, 3:07 PM
I think this has to be your best story yet, Derek! I love world domination stories, and this one's so hot.
May 20, 2005
Anonymous
11/17/19, 1:42 PM
The ending made me sad. :<
Anonymous
11/17/19, 12:44 PM
A bit rushed, and quite sloppy grammar, but really hot! Maybe try extra-proofreading next time. This has huuuuuge potential, my dude
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
11/17/19, 9:09 AM
I agree with making Drax a nudist power-bottom
Boon
11/17/19, 5:42 AM
Fantastic! there's not enough Star Lord humiliation stories around. I love this one, especially the ending, with him leaving a trail of piss on his new slutty gear. I would love to see further humiliation for him, maybe being used as a pissoir in public, or something mocking his past as a hero.
Anonymous
11/17/19, 4:25 AM
hope this continues further
Anonymous
11/17/19, 3:21 AM
Please make more! I loved this