Recent Comments

Anonymous
11/15/19, 2:04 PM
loved the chapter i just wish there was more humiliation for bill, I did like how he had to mow the law, it was so hot. But i was hoping his tormentor would make another appearance. overall i loved what you did to this amazing series.
Loved it
11/15/19, 7:35 AM
Great idea. Compelling read.
Anonymous
11/15/19, 7:12 AM
Fantastic.
11/15/19, 4:00 AM
Short simple mind control. A good short read. I really liked the one sided conversation.
Roland00
11/15/19, 3:50 AM
Any chance we can get Stan to make Dan moan and bottom like he used to do in Part 2? Of course can remain as a "mostly" top.
Anonymous
11/15/19, 3:29 AM
I did not realize it was a tumblr post. Well written even without photos as there were enough details here. Great to know about your page, too.
Lou
11/14/19, 11:59 PM
I really love this story...one of the best I have read in a while for sure.......please keep it going and going
David S
11/14/19, 11:52 PM
Great story! I particularly like the slightly devious undertone...
Anonymous
11/14/19, 9:00 PM
I loved this, sounds so REAL, I had to change my pantyhose three times as I came in them....... brilliant.... love ,ore of this kind....
LittleMonster
11/14/19, 8:56 PM
I think there need to be more ABDL stories on here. So thanks for writing one. I think you were too brief in your descriptions. Pretty much every three sentence paragraph could have been expanded on significantly. For example your protagonist was completely shaved in one sentence. That could have been expanded to a whole scene. You could have described the lathering, then shaving area by area, starting with chest then arms, legs, then finally armpits and crotch. You could have the internal monologue of the protagonist throughout the process, and failed attempts at resisting. You need an editor or someone to read the story before you post. It is hard to find someone to read kinky stories but it would be worth the effort if you can find one. Also you used the word “exhumed” but I think you meant “exuded.” Over all good story, I would like to see more.