Recent Comments

Anonymous
11/13/19, 11:21 AM
keep going, please
Anonymous
11/13/19, 9:43 AM
I would say less pictures, but honestly I want to hear more about college or high-school students please, bcuz they're so hot.
Evan
11/13/19, 9:34 AM
Great writing. Perfect setup and transformation. And nice use of musk too. Congrats on a great story.
Anonymous
11/13/19, 8:46 AM
Loved it!
Anonymous
11/13/19, 7:41 AM
honestly, the pictures really threw me out of the story. I like to imagine what the guys look like and the pics bot make that harder and distract me from the story
Oddballs
11/13/19, 5:20 AM
I am 100% your last paragraph - I too feel like I have a lot of good ideas, but setting up a chronological plot and story-like scenario is very challenging for me. Like, I'm hoping that my stories inspire other writers into doing their renditions with the same sort of ideas I come up with. You definitely do have an interesting idea here in this story, I will say that.
Anonymous
11/13/19, 4:00 AM
Lovely and romantic. Very poetic in it's own way
Anonymous
11/13/19, 3:53 AM
YES!! One vote for a football transformation. Love to see a nerd who are forced to wear a set of football gear by Coach or his players and become a focused and dedicated player. (my favorite is a victim-turns-into-a-victimizer story)
Anonymous
11/13/19, 3:52 AM
I can see it now. Guardians of the Galaxy doing a delivery over a rare klyntar a.k.a Symbiote that can make the host nearly immortal and genetic make up is copied. Thanos and his men restrained them as the Klyntar senses Thanos' anger and passion and bonding with him. Thus making his semen and symbiote combined to make symbiote spawn. Along with the infinity gauntlet he can make the symbiote be like a virus and anyone bonded with Thanos' symbiote gets to be apart of a hive mind. Also symbiote can turn to any clothing the host's desires. looking forward for more. Please continue this...
11/13/19, 1:14 AM
That was a good story. A hot "attitude adjustment." A little description about what Condor's reprogramming and any resistance would have been an added ++. And the pics....EXCELLENT. Most pics in stories on this site disappoint. But yours were perfection. Aptly placed and that kid could be the rude punk he was or the obedient muscle twink he became. And the dichotomy of "...and show you the best cock you would ever have” to being cock locked in a cage. Like Canute at the end, you can only laugh at the irony. Thanks for a good one.