Recent Comments

11/13/19, 3:06 PM
Loving this and waiting eagerly for more updates and other works!
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
11/13/19, 2:36 PM
I meant the "whole kingdom" as a hyperbole for a mass transformation, the whole castle is good enough to me
11/13/19, 1:04 PM
I'm so glad people seem to like it! I'm tumbling a few ideas in my head right now and if anything worth developing emerges I'd love to do it. @joaopamilio@hotmail.com The entire kingdom would be a lot but there may be a defection of an entire castle or something like that. Thanks to everyone!
Anonymous
11/13/19, 12:24 PM
This ticks off so many boxes for me it's fantastic, thank you! Any possibility of a sequel?
Anonymous
11/13/19, 11:21 AM
keep going, please
Anonymous
11/13/19, 9:43 AM
I would say less pictures, but honestly I want to hear more about college or high-school students please, bcuz they're so hot.
Evan
11/13/19, 9:34 AM
Great writing. Perfect setup and transformation. And nice use of musk too. Congrats on a great story.
Anonymous
11/13/19, 8:46 AM
Loved it!
Anonymous
11/13/19, 7:41 AM
honestly, the pictures really threw me out of the story. I like to imagine what the guys look like and the pics bot make that harder and distract me from the story
Oddballs
11/13/19, 5:20 AM
I am 100% your last paragraph - I too feel like I have a lot of good ideas, but setting up a chronological plot and story-like scenario is very challenging for me. Like, I'm hoping that my stories inspire other writers into doing their renditions with the same sort of ideas I come up with. You definitely do have an interesting idea here in this story, I will say that.