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BostonSatyr
11/11/19, 4:50 PM
definitely a different tone than we're used to on this site. its rare we see a man's wishes granted, & it turns out for the best. I found it touching. bravo!
Martin
11/11/19, 4:34 PM
Hot!
11/11/19, 4:17 PM
> McGrath needs to get his head out of his ass and put a dick in it instead. > I agree! Please Google Image "Frank McGrath" :)
stinkykev@gmail.com
11/11/19, 3:47 PM
or turn him into a workie
garpe97@gmail.com
11/11/19, 3:15 PM
Great job, I can't wait to read the next chapter. I would like to know what happens with the new drones and if the rubber gown will be the skin of the new drones. Thanks for it!!
Anonymous
11/11/19, 2:42 PM
I have this sudden urge to visit the library.
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
11/11/19, 1:47 PM
Will these gloves grow to completely encase him in a seamless suit?
11/11/19, 7:36 AM
Yeah. Sorry. Not a professional writer. Even I find it short, but I'm the kind of people who prefer to leave space for people to imagine what they want, so I don't do much description. Also the characters got sometimes described in other chapter (Ty) while other I read dozens chapters with and no writer gave them a physical description (Chad), so I don not change too much what have been given. I write my own stuff, and in it I do get more descriptive, but I still forgot to name the protagonist in the first whole chapter, so even there it need work. And yes, Leo was probably the one of the seven I was the most invested in with Jason. I'm even now thinking of wrting a leo harem fic, but I think most people won't have read PJO/HOO and won't understand much with my rushed word-building.
toy #4
11/11/19, 3:07 AM
Glad there's was not a long wait for this chapter. Eagerly waiting for the Captain's takedown and his own description of it. Looking forward to more betrayal (will the accomplice be harvested as well? will the doctor try to harvest his handlers in England? will the doctor be able to successfully fake the men returning to normal?)
toy #4
11/11/19, 2:54 AM
Great story! Also recommend your Zagreb story, similar in method of control, but more from the victim's perspective.