Recent Comments

Anonymous
11/11/19, 2:42 PM
I have this sudden urge to visit the library.
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
11/11/19, 1:47 PM
Will these gloves grow to completely encase him in a seamless suit?
11/11/19, 7:36 AM
Yeah. Sorry. Not a professional writer. Even I find it short, but I'm the kind of people who prefer to leave space for people to imagine what they want, so I don't do much description. Also the characters got sometimes described in other chapter (Ty) while other I read dozens chapters with and no writer gave them a physical description (Chad), so I don not change too much what have been given. I write my own stuff, and in it I do get more descriptive, but I still forgot to name the protagonist in the first whole chapter, so even there it need work. And yes, Leo was probably the one of the seven I was the most invested in with Jason. I'm even now thinking of wrting a leo harem fic, but I think most people won't have read PJO/HOO and won't understand much with my rushed word-building.
toy #4
11/11/19, 3:07 AM
Glad there's was not a long wait for this chapter. Eagerly waiting for the Captain's takedown and his own description of it. Looking forward to more betrayal (will the accomplice be harvested as well? will the doctor try to harvest his handlers in England? will the doctor be able to successfully fake the men returning to normal?)
toy #4
11/11/19, 2:54 AM
Great story! Also recommend your Zagreb story, similar in method of control, but more from the victim's perspective.
Anonymous
11/10/19, 10:54 PM
> Truthfully, though, I was hoping readers would be pulling for McGrath… Oh don't get me wrong, I am absolutely hoping that McGrath and Zelinski also end up as a couple. McGrath needs to get his head out of his ass and put a dick in it instead.
11/10/19, 8:56 PM
Oh I liked it :) I'm glad you wrote a chapter including Leo. Thank you. Besides, giving him control is very interesting, it is a possibility that I had not considered at least for the moment, I like it. Maybe later I'll try to write something on this line. Will you allow me to make a constructive criticism? I think everything happens too fast. The text focuses too much on the direct actions of the characters and not enough on their thoughts, feelings or the environment around them. Of course I am excessively descriptive in my stories, it is not necessary to do that, but personally I really enjoy reading stories with many descriptions of the world, its characters, their bodies and clothes, etc. It is only a recommendation. Apart from that, I'm glad you liked Leo's character enough to write a chapter for him :)
Anonymous
11/10/19, 6:12 PM
This really should be continued. One of the hottest things on here!
Anonymous
11/10/19, 5:06 PM
Oh I liked the warning. It makes me feel like the doctor on one of his accomplices or thrills is reading this site and trying to shut up the one piece here that isn't just fiction. It's a clever metatextual thing
11/10/19, 4:16 PM
The warning in-story at the beginning is kind of annoying. Why and how would people know he has the info.