Recent Comments

Anonymous
11/10/19, 6:12 PM
This really should be continued. One of the hottest things on here!
Anonymous
11/10/19, 5:06 PM
Oh I liked the warning. It makes me feel like the doctor on one of his accomplices or thrills is reading this site and trying to shut up the one piece here that isn't just fiction. It's a clever metatextual thing
11/10/19, 4:16 PM
The warning in-story at the beginning is kind of annoying. Why and how would people know he has the info.
Corinthian
11/10/19, 2:23 PM
Very hot story - thanks. And promising to get even better! Really looking forward to the next chapter.
11/10/19, 1:30 PM
I sent an edit, hasn't been published yet. My apologies.
11/10/19, 1:20 PM
> I hope for a happy ending for Max and Tucker > Me, too! No, seriously, I'm following my own rules on this one. When I put this up as a Community Story, I asked that at the end of each story arc, the status quo be maintained -- sort of like a sitcom (or a comic book): we always return to the default setting when the adventure is over. Max is truly one of my favorite characters. Even though he hasn't had much to do with the plot -- yet -- this story was designed for him. Have faith. I like him with Tucker, too. Truthfully, though, I was hoping readers would be pulling for McGrath...
11/10/19, 12:39 PM
Totally got into it. Especially loved the cousin on cousin action
Martin
11/10/19, 8:48 AM
Don't you want to change the stories title, now that it's finished?
Anonymous
11/10/19, 8:29 AM
Great idea, love this chapter and really looking forward to seeing how this progresses
llx_244@hotmail.com
11/10/19, 5:57 AM
Fuckin lovd it