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Anonymous
11/10/19, 1:07 AM
Fantastic story!
Anonymous
11/10/19, 12:59 AM
so happy to read more of this story. I cant wait for the next chapter.
11/9/19, 11:10 PM
> You’ve got such a gift for blending interesting characterization with suspenseful plotting and hot sex scenes! > That's the trifecta, isn't it? I think we all strive for the perfect balance every time we sit down to write something. In this story, I'm trying to be... faster in my narrative and "get to it" a little more quickly. One of those writing rules about starting as deep into the action as possible, or something like that that I vaguely remember from grad school workshops... I again note that this story is coming out very quickly and has been flowing easily. Even the details I hadn't worked out solved themselves without any real effort on my part. I've been having a lot of fun writing it. Glad you're enjoying it!!!!! Maybe someday I'll figure that Parasite arc out...
Anonymous
11/9/19, 11:05 PM
this series is so hot and I love all your stories man!
11/9/19, 9:56 PM
@BobbyBlobfish: Thank you. I hope to live up to expectations and write good next chapters. In this case Leo is a boy with confidence, or so I imagine. :) I try to be neutral with Sam, although I am definitely inclined to the submissive side hahaha. Opinions? @Anon: Thank you very much :) Yes, there will definitely be more chapters on my part. In fact I already have much of the next written chapter. I still have to write the end, which I am not sure how to address it. In addition I have been sick these days so I had no strength or inspiration to write. But I will try to publish it as soon as possible :)
Jul 23, 2019
Bart
11/9/19, 8:59 PM
great story, hope you write some more of this kind
11/9/19, 8:26 PM
You've got such a gift for blending interesting characterization with suspenseful plotting and hot sex scenes! I'm loving this series, and I can't wait to see what happens next.
11/9/19, 7:33 PM
Interesting, I read this part out of order so I'm not sure what actually might be going on. But I had the thought it might be like Fight Club - the narrator is Rbbrfrk9 and has disassociated it. I mean, how hot is it to be dominated by your other personality instead of an outside agent?
Kerupt1
11/9/19, 7:27 PM
Please please PLEASE tell me there will be a part 2
Nov 8, 2019
degoetz@yahoo.com
11/9/19, 7:08 PM
This is way too much going on too fast, but it still got me off