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malskin
11/8/19, 4:31 PM
thanks for this chapter from the pervious chapter Bill the Boss has worked hard on Mark to get him to the point where more direct action was needed. got a sticky keyboard here. i am liking how Mark AKAA Marky was more than happy to dress in dirty jeans and wifebeater - the new Mark seems to have a evil streak in him, (“*You want this, don’t you boy?” He asked, a cruel smile creeping over his face.)* making me wonder what else Bill has got in store for Marky. i also liked how Marky went back to work as if he now part of the work gang.
11/8/19, 4:07 PM
Yes * /// * but right now someone in mu house stole my computer and I'm waiting to get it back :(
11/8/19, 4:07 PM
> why blue ball us to the big event! Trust me, I'm blue balled too. I wasn't planning a multiple part story but it is growing like that. just lie back and take the edging, I'll drain those balls... eventually!
11/8/19, 4:02 PM
This chapter has been great. Can't wait for the next one :D
11/8/19, 4:02 PM
Do you plan to continue your Will takeover story? Because both stories are really cool and I can't wait to see what happens!
Anonymous
11/8/19, 1:22 PM
It would be nice to see more of an internal conflict with the patent. to draw that out more. But a great start.
11/8/19, 12:52 PM
> is it possible we might see Loki being “adopted” by Thanos as well. Problem is that Thanos and Loki might be too similar. Both seductive and power hungry with daddie issues and Loki may have powerful enough magic to resist Thanos’ power however would love to see Loki being turned into the Hulk’s bottom bitch. I must confess to not having planned to do Loki. *Looks left and right to see who is about before whispering*: Tom Hiddleston doesnt do it for me, I only have eyes for the hunks of the MCU. Having said that you have given me an idea for Loki but it might be a while before I get to it, stay tuned...
11/8/19, 12:50 PM
Honestly I see a lot of attention on Leo and how perfect he look. Given the fact that in the novels he come from, his main personalities trait were builder and insecure, I think he will need more confidence thanks to the amulet to be in a stable relation. And if you want a submissive Sam for people to identify with, don't worry, others writer will cover for you.
Nov 8, 2019
Anonymous
11/8/19, 8:47 AM
the narrative spun wildly out of my understanding
Feb 21, 2018
11/8/19, 4:57 AM
Fucking love it.