Recent Comments

Corinthian
11/8/19, 10:16 PM
Strong writing, and uplifting too - many thanks.
Corinthian
11/8/19, 9:40 PM
Many thanks - such a good story! Very creative and subtle.
Anonymous
11/8/19, 8:49 PM
I would love to see spider man chapter after thor's
Anthony
11/8/19, 8:40 PM
im not crying. youre crying. 10/10
11/8/19, 8:25 PM
What's the problem? I like constructive criticism, so do explain what is too much present, so I can put less in the next chapter(s).
Anonymous
11/8/19, 8:07 PM
You try to read Hypno-Tales stories or mafisto and then we talk about the size or the info dumps.
Anonymous
11/8/19, 5:39 PM
to much in one story
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
11/8/19, 4:41 PM
ouch, that sucks, I hope you recover the computer soon
malskin
11/8/19, 4:31 PM
thanks for this chapter from the pervious chapter Bill the Boss has worked hard on Mark to get him to the point where more direct action was needed. got a sticky keyboard here. i am liking how Mark AKAA Marky was more than happy to dress in dirty jeans and wifebeater - the new Mark seems to have a evil streak in him, (β€œ*You want this, don’t you boy?” He asked, a cruel smile creeping over his face.)* making me wonder what else Bill has got in store for Marky. i also liked how Marky went back to work as if he now part of the work gang.
11/8/19, 4:07 PM
Yes * /// * but right now someone in mu house stole my computer and I'm waiting to get it back :(