Recent Comments

11/6/19, 12:23 PM
don't worry, I know this is getting a little confuse to follow (I personally only got it because I re-read the last chapter before reading the new one). but is just a little detail, for the rest the story is amazing :3
Nov 6, 2019
Anonymous
11/6/19, 9:03 AM
This may be your best story yet! Loved the twist, loved everything about it!
Anonymous
11/6/19, 8:46 AM
I love this so much, itd be really interesting to have an immobile charles do to weight gain but that's just a personal thing! I'm curious do you have a liking towards bearish/older men?
Anonymous
11/6/19, 8:03 AM
Not bad for a first chapter but really i'm more curious about how this will develop in the next chapters (which i do hope there will be) there are like grammar errors which are not too bad as to not get the point across but that you should fix if you can. You might want to get a proofreader person or software (i hear grammarly is not bad?) Overall, kudos on your first story
Anonymous
11/6/19, 4:53 AM
Great story!! Loved it!!!!!
11/6/19, 2:38 AM
It'll be continued, as soon as I have time. I got super-busy with work travel, and now with work-work, the latest involving writing several papers. At the end of the day, I don't want to write anymore! So, gotta wait a bit longer.
UchihaDEMS
11/5/19, 10:37 PM
Oh the gay dilema... I feel ya lol And I love some big sub small top, not common and less ofit if we see an older dad getting to be from top to bottom, so... I love this! Please continue. I assume the son will fall as well, but oh I want more old people to fall <3 And feet... but thats just me :P
HypnoGuido
11/5/19, 9:38 PM
Would be hot, if you hadn't stolen half of it from Lisa Teez's "Sherlock Holmes and the Case of the Pampered Pussy" you can find it on MC Stories. I'm a fan of erotic fixation. Breasts, cock, pussy etc. This is how I recognised it, it's a classic and a personal go too. I guess you figured tha this site's target audience wouldn't go for that sort of thing, and hell just change a couple of lines here and there and you're good. Bro. Stop.
Nov 3, 2019
Anonymous
11/5/19, 8:35 PM
Brillant and super HOT! Thanks you for taking so much time doing this!!
11/5/19, 6:01 PM
Ops thanks for the remark! Actually it's because between chapters another path as been written by someone else and in that path it's ryan the twin used. I put the name I read the most recently! My apologies....