Recent Comments

Nov 3, 2019
11/4/19, 7:39 PM
A work of art, one of, if not, the best Choose-Your-Own-Adventure story that I've ever read.
Anonymous
11/4/19, 7:14 PM
Hope you keep writing! The fact that he's aware is so hot!
Nov 3, 2019
jockedguy
11/4/19, 6:52 PM
this is amazing. deeply deeply impressed. also this branch, the dummy branch - EASILY my favorite.
Alex
11/4/19, 6:30 PM
I wonder what the kids learn at school
Anonymous
11/4/19, 6:11 PM
I know this hasn't been updated in a WHILE but I really hope to see more!
ForgottenCradle
11/4/19, 5:55 PM
awesome first chapter for a first story. I'm excited to see where this goes thumb up from me
Anonymous
11/4/19, 4:37 PM
Hoping for more chapters to follow
Anonymous
11/4/19, 4:31 PM
Great start. I can see the inspiration from Edlam.
Anonymous
11/4/19, 2:59 PM
yes I am looking forward to the next chapter
ArgFela97
11/4/19, 2:23 PM
glad to see you back! Hope you post more soon!