Recent Comments

tomozco
11/4/19, 11:57 PM
Thanks guys! Like I said, this story was born out of a plot idea I got out of the photos you see. So this is just a short story on its own and I don't have more in mind for this plot. However, I do have another story that I wrote similarly based on a bunch net photos...I will post that in the next day or so. Stay tuned!
Martin
11/4/19, 10:40 PM
An all time classic and one of my favorite stories on the site!
Anonymous
11/4/19, 8:50 PM
More please!
Feb 25, 2016
firesix
11/4/19, 8:22 PM
So crazy hot. Love it. The world is a better place for you having written this :-)
Nov 3, 2019
11/4/19, 7:39 PM
A work of art, one of, if not, the best Choose-Your-Own-Adventure story that I've ever read.
Anonymous
11/4/19, 7:14 PM
Hope you keep writing! The fact that he's aware is so hot!
Nov 3, 2019
jockedguy
11/4/19, 6:52 PM
this is amazing. deeply deeply impressed. also this branch, the dummy branch - EASILY my favorite.
Alex
11/4/19, 6:30 PM
I wonder what the kids learn at school
Anonymous
11/4/19, 6:11 PM
I know this hasn't been updated in a WHILE but I really hope to see more!
ForgottenCradle
11/4/19, 5:55 PM
awesome first chapter for a first story. I'm excited to see where this goes thumb up from me