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Anonymous
11/4/19, 2:59 PM
yes I am looking forward to the next chapter
ArgFela97
11/4/19, 2:23 PM
glad to see you back! Hope you post more soon!
Nov 1, 2019
Anonymous
11/4/19, 1:32 PM
I hope this isn't the last we see of Harrow!
Anonymous
11/4/19, 12:35 PM
awesome love it
Nov 3, 2019
Anonymous
11/4/19, 12:16 PM
great game! Very well done. Makes me wanna give rim jobs, drink piss and be mindwiped all in one evening. :P
11/4/19, 11:38 AM
Lol just fixed it. Meant to say 1 pm. Thanks for letting me know :D
Anonymous
11/4/19, 11:34 AM
small note: there's not much sun at 1am
Anonymous
11/4/19, 8:26 AM
glad youre back T. more chapters or episodes?
11/4/19, 7:24 AM
Yes, Red Witch is a play on Scarlet Witch because you know, copyright issue :p Thank you joaopomilio, your comments are always appreciated ! Thank you MonsterMash62! you're one of my favourite writer in this site haha @TconJ : Personally for me, i do not plan the story far ahead. I just write a short story whenever i got the inspiration. Maybe it would explain the lack of coherence and plot setting. It's also because this is a community story and anyone can add new chapters. The chapters i added mostly serve as a setting for people to draw inspiration and maybe they would continue from the ideas. I am well aware of my shortcomings, since i'm a relatively new writer, but i will try to improve. Thanks for the advice !
11/4/19, 6:56 AM
That's so true! I totally agree with that. I did plan on giving Bob a back story on how he met Kyle and how he ended up living with them.I got too carried away tho and forgot about it. I'm a big fan of Edlam and how he writes detailed backgrounds about the guy he mind fucks. I'll go disect that and apply it on the second chapter. Thanks for reminding me! I'll make sure to add it on the second chapter. I'm thinking of starting it from where we left. Kyle's "morning" has just started anyway :D Thanks a lot for your awesome feedback!