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TconJ
11/4/19, 1:13 AM
ok like....I start seeing some writers here do this...really overly convenient plot jump whenever they want to. it's a good chapter...."had you wrote a chapter on how this turn south before this".... Not, I want to write something new so I'm just time jump now and somehow miraculously get to that point I want. It's super cheesy and cliche. It's not just you, but I advice you to have some plot leading up to this otherwise you will have scattering ideas all over and your story collapse.
Apr 11, 2008
Pete
11/4/19, 1:12 AM
Very sexy story with lots of reverse psychology along with boomarang spells running amuk. I was rock hard the whole time. More, please!
Nov 3, 2019
Anonymous
11/3/19, 11:21 PM
Wow, amazing work! Incredibly hot scenes, and the replay value is insane. You should be incredibly proud of what you accomplished!
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
11/3/19, 10:33 PM
I wonder if the editor's powers will grow to the point where it becomes irresistible
11/3/19, 10:12 PM
Nice ending! The red witch knowing the voice and revealing it’s something malevolent deepens the mystery of how Editor got his powers and why. I’m excited to see where you take this next.
Nov 3, 2019
11/3/19, 10:11 PM
So does everything result in submission or can you be dominate. Also is there any chance of rimming.
Nov 3, 2019
JockPupTraxxx
11/3/19, 10:08 PM
What a fun game! I am going to keep playing!
Nov 3, 2019
11/3/19, 10:01 PM
I've cum twice already playing the game, holy shit this is phenomenal
jeffpetier@yahoo.com
11/3/19, 9:37 PM
so glad your back with more stories.
11/3/19, 9:18 PM
I really seem to be enjoying most of your stories but this one might be my favorite. I wish the story had gone a little longer with more specific changes, was really hoping Kyle would ask him about his dick. I hope you enjoyed writing this chapter as that might mean hearing about additional dates with Kyle Jones.