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11/3/19, 12:15 PM
> I just can’t get enough of your slutty, dumbed-down Supermen. > Hahaha -- me, neither, thanks! You know how sometimes you struggle to put the right sentence together, or slave to get out of the corner you've written yourself into? And then other times it just falls out of your head like the breaking of a dam and you can't write fast enough? This story is the latter for me. It's been such fun to write this that it restores my faith in my process. Now, can I tell you a secret that (I hope) as a writer yourself, you'll empathize with? I don't have all the details worked out. I mean, I know the ULTIMATE ending -- in that I know the last scene and sentence -- but I haven't exactly worked out how I'm going to get there, which is highly unusual for me. I'm usually plotted before I hit the page. I'm not stressed, tho -- I have another chapter to go before I get to all that stuff anyway. Hopefully by then I'll have everything figured out. I'm going with the idea that it's been easy so far...
Anonymous
11/3/19, 10:48 AM
This is one of your best, man. I also love Apollyon and would love to see it come back!
Martin
11/3/19, 10:15 AM
Very lovely! Short and hot.
Anonymous
11/3/19, 10:10 AM
I also wondered if I heard that theres a new agency sending their models to this gym to 'stay in shape'? and also wondered if and how carson noticed his changes? would be great to read more about how his body, style and behaviour changed over time?
Anonymous
11/3/19, 9:42 AM
Pretty fun idea. I wonder who Jalen's life will be different from here on out?
Anonymous
11/3/19, 9:03 AM
This is a great idea, but unfortunately somewhat awkward with the German lines and some holes in the plot. I hope you'll keep on going.
11/3/19, 4:34 AM
Another great chapter! I just can't get enough of your slutty, dumbed-down Supermen.
Trixx
11/3/19, 4:21 AM
Amazing story not too often you see doll work its so underrated. Im happy you made this series. Also loved the wedgie part. Hot self spanking he deserved it for taking a call and being a bad boy. Am I the only one who wanted see him crap his undies :p
11/3/19, 4:20 AM
Great first chapter. Can't wait to read on.
nycboot
11/3/19, 2:27 AM
Gads, this story is crazy - exceptionally good - but crazy! So many twists and turns, shifts, points of view - it's like being on a psycho-sexual roller coaster.