Recent Comments

12/18/19, 2:49 AM
I really love the idea and format of the story here, but I feel like it could be just a hair longer. Maybe there could be more hints to that "snuff" situation past of the suspect's refutal, or maybe there could be a more detailed sex scene near the end. Granted, the latter would be harder considering that you're only using dialogue to propel the story, but check out Wesley Bracken's "Letters from Prison" to see how he does it. Again, this is an awesome idea, and I hope you keep running with it!
Dec 16, 2019
Geoff M
12/18/19, 2:32 AM
Great premise! i would love to read more about his dad serving and obeying in humiliating ways!
12/18/19, 2:06 AM
Excellent story. Great pup transformations on both of them. And I vote pups only.
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
12/18/19, 1:28 AM
I agree
Anonymous
12/18/19, 1:09 AM
This is is super hot. More please!
Dec 17, 2019
Anonymous
12/17/19, 10:45 PM
so hot!!!!!
Dec 16, 2019
Anonymous
12/17/19, 9:29 PM
Hot story. Slave dad stories are the best.
JockPupTraxxx
12/17/19, 9:29 PM
Still love this story
Anonymous
12/17/19, 8:37 PM
I'm not usually a fan of superhero stories, but this one has everything I want! Humiliation, muscle growth, dumbing down, and evil clowns. Thank you for the current four chapters ,and I do hope to see more!
Unheilig43@gmail.com
12/17/19, 7:17 PM
Awesome story!!