Recent Comments

Anonymous
11/1/19, 9:40 PM
this is a great series! can you continue the Stacey's dad series too?
Anonymous
11/1/19, 9:31 PM
Love this!
Anonymous
11/1/19, 5:46 PM
the first story i read on this site and undoubtedly still the hottest
Anonymous
11/1/19, 1:40 PM
i dont know, i always love josmiths stories but im having issues trying to read this story and see it as romantic. At the end of the day the uncle really only started liking him because of the chip.
Anonymous
11/1/19, 1:37 PM
still awiting for the conclusion
Ken
11/1/19, 1:33 PM
This is a FANTASTIC story. Think I'm in love/lust with them both.
11/1/19, 11:04 AM
> For some reason this reminds me of Apollyon and the effects of staying in the second stage. > As I said upthread, dumbing-down is an element in a lot of my stories, though it isn't necessarily a fetish or turn-on for me. I'm more turned on by the "hive-mind" kind of transformation -- like jock teams and fighting units. (Or any of the stuff produced by Baralai.) Not that I don't find a big, dumb musclehead appealing... I haven't read APOLLYON in a good long time. 26 chapters?? Good Dog, what was I thinking? That just went on and on...
ForgottenCradle
11/1/19, 10:07 AM
I'm really a fan of how this story turned from a tale of control into a sweet relationship. This is right up my alley. Nicely written,too.
Nov 1, 2019
Martin
11/1/19, 8:44 AM
You're really an amazing writer, Ethan. There are not many people who can write with such intensity. However, you're also cruel. A cruel and amazing writer. I'm afraid I'm completely at your mercy when I read one of your stories.
ForgottenCradle
11/1/19, 8:35 AM
this was really cool and kinda awkward to read german at the same time but I liked it. a lot