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Nov 24, 2024
11/25/24, 8:16 PM
This sounds like an experience you had yourself or one you're dreaming about. Quite realistic, and that's meant as a compliment. Nicely done!

11/25/24, 8:21 PM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) Not an experience I had, sadly. But it is based on an experience where I went to a kinky shop in London just a week ago, didn’t have enough money and they just gave me a discount. My mind made up the rest of the fantasy. Also, thanks for the compliment! It’s my first time publishing a story in almost 4 years!
May 10, 2015
11/25/24, 7:25 PM
Yes Please fully train me. After reading it again. I What it all.
Anonymous
11/25/24, 7:12 PM
When's the next chapters?
11/25/24, 6:46 PM
Please tell me we are getting more! I need more of this!
Nov 22, 2024
gdlosh13@gmail.com
11/24/24, 1:14 PM
Will there more like it cumming our way?

11/25/24, 3:44 PM
@gdlosh13@gmail.com Sorry, this story was a "one off". I have no ideas on how to further the narrative. Everything I wanted to tell happened to Sam. Probably the only thing left, and I think the reader would make this assumption is: as an influencer, Sam would've encouraged more men to visit this gym, and the process would repeat itself as each curious man entered its doors.
Nov 22, 2024
11/24/24, 6:02 AM
I also feel that some milky white shower gels/liquid soaps look like cum, especially those that claim "added musk". Of course, that refers to synthetic musk similar to the smell of deer musk, but sometimes I wonder what if it is "human musk"? Reading this story was so satisfying that I couldn't help but want to take a shower, lubricate and jerk off with musk soap.

11/25/24, 3:38 PM
@[Tofu83](/user/show/87624) If you felt compelled to shower, lubricate and jerk off ... then your programming is perfectly installed and you are functioning as expected.
11/25/24, 3:36 PM
Absolutely amazing 😍
11/25/24, 2:42 PM
The pictures you put here with your excellent story are flawless. You definitely know what you’re writing about.
11/25/24, 2:40 PM
Fantastic, and oh wow!
11/25/24, 7:16 AM
I like the basic idea for the plot, but for me there was not enough seduction. I like to feel the power shift from Dom to sub. This moved a little too fast for me, and at the end of this chapter I was still left with too many questions and no second chapter!

11/25/24, 12:42 PM
@[boi98229](/user/show/10027285) Thankyou for the feedback, I agree that I did move too quickly with little seduction, I wrote this yesterday, a second chapter is on its way, I'm hoping to create a series that shows the shift of will through each installment, and don't worry there will be much more seduction.