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Nov 22, 2024
gdlosh13@gmail.com
11/24/24, 1:14 PM
Will there more like it cumming our way?

11/25/24, 3:44 PM
@gdlosh13@gmail.com Sorry, this story was a "one off". I have no ideas on how to further the narrative. Everything I wanted to tell happened to Sam. Probably the only thing left, and I think the reader would make this assumption is: as an influencer, Sam would've encouraged more men to visit this gym, and the process would repeat itself as each curious man entered its doors.
Nov 22, 2024
11/24/24, 6:02 AM
I also feel that some milky white shower gels/liquid soaps look like cum, especially those that claim "added musk". Of course, that refers to synthetic musk similar to the smell of deer musk, but sometimes I wonder what if it is "human musk"? Reading this story was so satisfying that I couldn't help but want to take a shower, lubricate and jerk off with musk soap.

11/25/24, 3:38 PM
@[Tofu83](/user/show/87624) If you felt compelled to shower, lubricate and jerk off ... then your programming is perfectly installed and you are functioning as expected.
11/25/24, 3:36 PM
Absolutely amazing 😍
11/25/24, 2:42 PM
The pictures you put here with your excellent story are flawless. You definitely know what you’re writing about.
11/25/24, 2:40 PM
Fantastic, and oh wow!
11/25/24, 7:16 AM
I like the basic idea for the plot, but for me there was not enough seduction. I like to feel the power shift from Dom to sub. This moved a little too fast for me, and at the end of this chapter I was still left with too many questions and no second chapter!

11/25/24, 12:42 PM
@[boi98229](/user/show/10027285) Thankyou for the feedback, I agree that I did move too quickly with little seduction, I wrote this yesterday, a second chapter is on its way, I'm hoping to create a series that shows the shift of will through each installment, and don't worry there will be much more seduction.
11/25/24, 11:26 AM
Love this, I hope you'll make more like this. The chastity, forced aspects, and public use parts are so hot
Nov 25, 2024
11/25/24, 4:58 AM
always love when you post, im still eagerly awaiting the surrendr remake and am so stoked to see a new story

11/25/24, 9:38 AM
@[StarryEyes](/user/show/535632) Thanks for reading! Still working on Surrendr 2.0!
11/24/24, 10:49 PM
"Choose one player to lose a foot of height and twenty pounds of muscle, and gain 5 SUB points." But then that player, using on himself became taller and bigger and dominant. Did you write this by mistake?

11/25/24, 12:29 AM
@[Leoscurse](/user/show/1219438) Cards played on yourself have the reverse effect. Was one of the rules mentioned in part 1 of the story :)

11/25/24, 8:32 AM
@[Kouros](/user/show/960794) Ah forgot
11/25/24, 7:17 AM
Amazing chapter can't wait for more of this and your other stories.