Recent Comments

Anonymous
10/30/19, 7:16 PM
Excellent
Boon
10/30/19, 3:33 PM
Ha, ha! it was great! I was expecting a good hot chapter but you wrote something even hotter and better! I'll be waiting for the next one!!!!
crashlander2002@yahoo.com
10/30/19, 3:31 PM
Interesting. needs to expand a sequel would be great!
Anonymous
10/30/19, 3:20 PM
Phenomenal!!
Anonymous
10/30/19, 2:37 PM
You should put this on Archive Of Our Own. It's a fanfic, that's where they really should go
10/30/19, 2:05 PM
Fuck, that's a hot story! I love dumbing-down stories, and this one is excellent. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Anonymous
10/30/19, 1:15 PM
Short, but sweet.
Santiago
10/30/19, 11:59 AM
paso concarl cauchopagsplease
Xeralt
10/30/19, 10:07 AM
Must say that I'm really enjoying the story so far. Hope that you end up continuing it, showing more of Man-o-Taur's journey into depravity and submission and of course to see what happens to Orca as well.
10/30/19, 7:04 AM
First, Hypnothrill critiquing my work is an honor and helpful. I made some edits after but not enough backstory, yes. What the best, most prolific writers on this site have is, well, good writing. They craft deep and complex worlds and characters and slowly lead up to the inevitable transformations. I'm a hack. Where chapter 1 is left forever by another author with the perfect lead up and no "graphic content," I've reached out to authors hoping to help. Collaborating would be a dream as you all see my strong suits and weaknesses. Or, your comments could dictate my next chapter or content, if your idea grabs my attention.