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Thiago
10/30/19, 10:16 PM
amor
Anonymous
10/30/19, 10:11 PM
Dear Petercbb ~ Anxiously awaiting further episodes of: "The Conversation". Thus far, I enjoy the storyline and the muscle-growth theme; hoping, Brad continues to progress with significant muscle-growth, his yearn for life-sustaining cum and a deepening (positive) relationship towards his Master, Bob Maxwell.
10/30/19, 9:54 PM
> I love dumbing-down stories... I can’t wait for the next chapter! > It's funny how dumbing-down isn't necessarily a fetish or turn-on for me, but it finds its way into a lot of my stories. The good thing about my dumb-downed characters is they're usually pretty happy about it, becoming more child-like and innocent rather than long-suffering by remembering how smart they used to be. This chapter and the first were originally combined into one longer piece. I'm glad I split them up -- even though the first "chapter" would more correctly be considered a "prologue" -- you know me and exposition. I have three more chapters plotted -- and my goal is to keep each chapter short and wankable. Thanks for reading along -- and for the comments! They always energize the writing process.
Anonymous
10/30/19, 7:16 PM
Excellent
Boon
10/30/19, 3:33 PM
Ha, ha! it was great! I was expecting a good hot chapter but you wrote something even hotter and better! I'll be waiting for the next one!!!!
crashlander2002@yahoo.com
10/30/19, 3:31 PM
Interesting. needs to expand a sequel would be great!
Anonymous
10/30/19, 3:20 PM
Phenomenal!!
Anonymous
10/30/19, 2:37 PM
You should put this on Archive Of Our Own. It's a fanfic, that's where they really should go
10/30/19, 2:05 PM
Fuck, that's a hot story! I love dumbing-down stories, and this one is excellent. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Anonymous
10/30/19, 1:15 PM
Short, but sweet.