Recent Comments

Anonymous
10/30/19, 12:32 AM
Nice setup!! Some of the details on each character made me interested in where it goes. Thrilled to see what comes next for Nathan!! Looking forward to seeing Nathan become like the seniors, working for Coach!!
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
10/30/19, 12:15 AM
keep going, please
Anonymous
10/29/19, 11:18 PM
It's out of left field but very curious too!
Anonymous
10/29/19, 11:03 PM
terrific
Anonymous
10/29/19, 9:44 PM
Great introduction! I love how you're playing the contrast between the internal resistance and the outward compulsion towards obedience. Can't wait to see where you go next
degoetz@yahoo.com
10/29/19, 8:38 PM
This was incredibly hot. The vivid descriptions elevate the eroticism above a lot of other material on this site. I look forward to whatever else you end up writing!
Anonymous
10/29/19, 7:23 PM
love this story. great writing and very dark. hope it continues.
Anonymous
10/29/19, 5:58 PM
More background to the story. I would want to read more.
Anonymous
10/29/19, 5:30 PM
it should be great when Nathan and other three wear a fencing mask and gear and pledge allegiance to Coach and seniors.
Anonymous
10/29/19, 4:45 PM
Not sure how I missed this when it was published, but it sure was hot. I'd love to read more about these two and those pills!