Recent Comments

Anonymous
10/28/19, 9:02 PM
It's a great story, but are you going to continue?
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
10/28/19, 8:43 PM
I really want this one to continue
10/28/19, 8:21 PM
Great story! I just wish there was a bit more description of how Brad and John looked at the end.
Anonymous
10/28/19, 8:08 PM
Great!
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
10/28/19, 7:59 PM
will we see part 6 soon?
10/28/19, 7:46 PM
A cool story! The guy knows he should freak out but he can't. i know I'd lose it if I lost a foot of height. If you do another one how about making the guy into bicyclist with Robert Forsterman sized quads and bubble butt ass? Just a thought, write what you want. Great Work!
firesix
10/28/19, 6:37 PM
Agree with Michael. I fucking love long blond hair. (I'm sure everyone knows that about me already, though.) Anyway, I always look forward to your stories, and this one did not disappoint. Keep being awesome Derek!
Michael
10/28/19, 6:28 PM
Very hot I love how the magic is never explained, how the narrator knows what is going to happen but not how. So he can never take control. My favorite detail was hos long blond hair
Geoff
10/28/19, 4:55 PM
Great story! Im hoping Daniel is very creative!
Anonymous
10/28/19, 4:29 PM
Great story!