Recent Comments

Ben
11/25/24, 5:03 AM
This was super hot!! Loved it!!!
11/25/24, 4:28 AM
When is the next chapter coming out?
11/25/24, 3:40 AM
AMAZING!!! BEEN WAITING for this comeback for a while. Still the same great writing and hot dumb jocks. Thanks for this new story can't wait for more
11/25/24, 1:56 AM
How can we make Jamie extremely hairy? He should get an mbp and grow that moustache into a huge walrus covering his whole mouth and chin…
11/25/24, 12:55 AM
Good job. Giving them "quests" to motivate them to do things they wouldn't normally and to get used to their new "roles" is very clever and makes the changes in personality and actions feel much more natural. More like they're doing the changes to themselves instead of having them imposed on them by the game. The fact that the two are also taking completely different paths adds some variety, and my guess is Alvis will end up going down the Int pathway. Excited for chapter 2. Keep up the good work.
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11/25/24, 12:06 AM
I have read several articles about being a Trad Wife. Even though they were serious articles, I got hard with each one fantasizing about being one.
Anonymaus
11/24/24, 2:36 PM
This whole story & idea are just bad . Many Typos, & other errors in the story. "Artefacts"? what is that? Using AI is also the laziest way anyone can write a story. You had an idea and no imagination to write it yourself so you took the path of least resistance and used free AI to do the sloppy writing for yourself? Please delete this & all the lame AI generated stories from this site or at least clearly marking them so that users can know that guys are to lazy to come up with & write their own stories anymore. Utter garbage .

11/24/24, 3:02 PM
@Anonymaus I tagged the story "#ai created" and I included a note at the start explaining very clearly that this was created with an AI story generator. If you chose to ignore the tags and the very clearly made statement that prefaced the story then that's your problem, not mine. If you dont like AI generated stories, dont read them.

11/24/24, 10:53 PM
@Anonymaus I'll just second what Jamr said, and I'll also add: don't do this. Don't click on stories that are clearly tagged and marked as something you dislike, and then proceed to act like an asshole about it in the comments section. The site has a robust tagging and filtering option. You have been given many options for curating your reading experience. I encourage you to do so.
11/24/24, 9:07 PM
I'm shocked that there aren't any comments yet! This story is really good and I'm looking forward to what's to come. Now I have to go back and look at your other series.

11/24/24, 9:23 PM
@[HimboPup](/user/show/10011980) Thank you that's very kind. They'll slot together so you will see plenty of cross over characters. As to why there are not many comments, pass. But I only started writing them last month for the Halloween challenge maybe it takes awhile for readers to commit to reading longer more character driven stories and new writers to learn what the audience wants. Plus this one only went uo a few days ago :blush:
11/24/24, 8:28 PM
Ooh that was hot, and now have a recurring character. I hope his dynamic with Anthony get explored more.
11/24/24, 7:12 PM
Very hot!