Recent Comments

joaopomilio@hotmail.com
10/28/19, 9:48 AM
keep going, this story is great
Anonymous
10/28/19, 8:34 AM
Excellent!!
10/28/19, 7:59 AM
Hot! I loved how weirdly everyone knows what the deal with Kyle is, and how nervous it makes the narrator through out the story.
slave499508824
10/28/19, 4:45 AM
It would have been interesting for someone to come dressed and a big dick with super big balls.
jeep4191@gmail.com
10/28/19, 2:32 AM
nycboot, Thank you for following the story... I tend to make chapters brief when packing in a lot of detail because I want readers to continue, and have found that it helps me be more succinct... believe me, in my head I have tons of backstory for all the characters and this entire reality. Who knows, maybe some day I'll expand one of these into a real book...
nycboot
10/28/19, 1:35 AM
The chapters are so brief but they're filled with such interesting content! Can't wait for more - and thank you!
Anonymous
10/28/19, 1:33 AM
I'm not really one for piss or scat, so didn't really care for this one. Keep on adding to the story, though - the first two chapters really turned my crank!
jeep4191@gmail.com
10/28/19, 1:26 AM
PupScout, Stick with the story... the culling of Varu from the pack was a tough decision for me as an author, but it was needed to move the plot forward. Hope you'll understand it better as the story moves forward...
10/27/19, 10:49 PM
I liked the new pups addition. The cannabilization of the brother was hard to take, but I'll wait to see why it had to be done. I do enjoy this story. I like primal pack.
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
10/27/19, 10:29 PM
will we see part 3?