Recent Comments

10/27/19, 1:21 PM
I think that what you've written is very hot, but to me, it doesn't feel like a complete story. There's no build-up to Thomas walking into the bathroom, which means there's no suspense and no chance to know who these characters were before we get into the sex and corruption. Also, the paragraph of authorial remarks at the beginning was a bit distracting, especially since it used the same formatting as the actual story.
anongingerdude
10/27/19, 11:25 AM
ive cum to this story so many times, but especially this chapter, the full transition into being a HAIRY JOCK BOY makes me climax so hard...!
ForgottenCradle
10/27/19, 11:05 AM
this was beautiful. I'm thrilled to see anything more of this sometime
Papa Werebear
10/27/19, 6:14 AM
Truly, I'm enjoying this story. It has much promise and it has themes I have already incorporated into my own works. Thank you, please do continue, I'm eager to see where you take this story.
10/27/19, 5:35 AM
That was truly awesome and a fantasy fulfilled
Alex
10/27/19, 3:42 AM
I love this story and idea so much! obese continue
10/27/19, 3:19 AM
Arrrrooo.... raw, primal....well done.
Boon
10/27/19, 1:53 AM
thanks for the reply! ha, ha, you're right, it's absurd to born uniformed! but could be just that he realize that he need a uniform to be a real Superman, so he could made it with similar stuff that find here and there (maybe in the garbage even!). In my mind he could wear some dirty y-fronts, a red towel, a pair of red trashed cowboy boots or rubber janitor boots or similar stuff that could work as a uniform. maybe even some superman suit came from an adult or fetish store! haha! I'll be waiting for the next chapter!
Frank1
10/26/19, 11:02 PM
i loved it, my only question is... who was doing the texting, and can i get them to text me???
Anonymous
10/26/19, 9:51 PM
continue please