Recent Comments

Anonymous
10/27/19, 6:22 PM
continue please
10/27/19, 6:09 PM
hey Hypnothrill! first of all, thanks a lot for this great hot new idea. make a bump in my underwear. :-) the next story is still at work. maybe your idea will used in a further story. ;-) nice to
Oct 27, 2019
Mutabear
10/27/19, 5:41 PM
This has an interesting idea but it is far too difficult to read.
Alex
10/27/19, 5:01 PM
Definitely one of the more original stories. i loved every moment of this one.
Anonymous
10/27/19, 4:53 PM
I liked it! Very much. Wish it had been longer or maybe two parts (Still opportunity),
10/27/19, 2:01 PM
Pretty hot story! I love the stuff with the slaves repeating their mantra. Too bad that the new slave was brought in with a gag in his mouth, because some dialogue where he's trying to resist could have made this even hotter (especially if the two men who are already hypno-collared are his former friends, who don't recognize him anymore).
EntrancedGay92
10/27/19, 1:53 PM
Well done! A fantasy of mine.
Oct 27, 2019
10/27/19, 1:49 PM
This starts out strong, with an interesting premise, but it gets incredibly confusing midway through. Why does it suddenly shift from 1st person narration to 3rd person dialogue?
EntrancedGay92
10/27/19, 1:45 PM
Nice premise and it's an original take on the incest stories (which I can never get enough of). I would enjoy reading a backstory on this family.
10/27/19, 1:35 PM
The sex and transformation scenes were really hot! I just didn't really like the big dump of expository dialogue at the end. Do you have to spell out all the rules of how this curse/disease works? Can't John just have a sudden instinctive urge to fuck some virgin ass? (Also, it would have been helpful to have a paragraph near the beginning explaining how and why John is an anal virgin, since that turns out to be such a pivotal plot point).