Recent Comments

11/25/24, 7:16 AM
I like the basic idea for the plot, but for me there was not enough seduction. I like to feel the power shift from Dom to sub. This moved a little too fast for me, and at the end of this chapter I was still left with too many questions and no second chapter!

11/25/24, 12:42 PM
@[boi98229](/user/show/10027285) Thankyou for the feedback, I agree that I did move too quickly with little seduction, I wrote this yesterday, a second chapter is on its way, I'm hoping to create a series that shows the shift of will through each installment, and don't worry there will be much more seduction.
11/25/24, 11:26 AM
Love this, I hope you'll make more like this. The chastity, forced aspects, and public use parts are so hot
Nov 25, 2024
11/25/24, 4:58 AM
always love when you post, im still eagerly awaiting the surrendr remake and am so stoked to see a new story

11/25/24, 9:38 AM
@[StarryEyes](/user/show/535632) Thanks for reading! Still working on Surrendr 2.0!
11/24/24, 10:49 PM
"Choose one player to lose a foot of height and twenty pounds of muscle, and gain 5 SUB points." But then that player, using on himself became taller and bigger and dominant. Did you write this by mistake?

11/25/24, 12:29 AM
@[Leoscurse](/user/show/1219438) Cards played on yourself have the reverse effect. Was one of the rules mentioned in part 1 of the story :)

11/25/24, 8:32 AM
@[Kouros](/user/show/960794) Ah forgot
11/25/24, 7:17 AM
Amazing chapter can't wait for more of this and your other stories.
11/25/24, 6:48 AM
😮
Zeke
11/25/24, 5:15 AM
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Ben
11/25/24, 5:03 AM
This was super hot!! Loved it!!!
11/25/24, 4:28 AM
When is the next chapter coming out?
11/25/24, 3:40 AM
AMAZING!!! BEEN WAITING for this comeback for a while. Still the same great writing and hot dumb jocks. Thanks for this new story can't wait for more