Recent Comments

Anonymous
10/26/19, 6:25 AM
Who cares about the apostrophe and this is definitely not a diaper story but it is hot and i hope you continue
Salmonella
10/26/19, 3:24 AM
*****Holy shit, msn! You absofuckinglutely have to continue this here story into a proper series. know what I mean?****
10/25/19, 11:26 PM
Thanks for letting me know :3
Anonymous
10/25/19, 11:24 PM
hopes doesn't have an apostrophe
jeep4191@gmail.com
10/25/19, 10:46 PM
Papa, I'll need to check out the Lovecraft! Thanks so much for the tip, that's one I've missed. Thanks for the compliments about my writing, they're much appreciated. As far as the dimming of intelligence that I use a lot when I write, it's probably because I over analyze everything, and feel a smart character would as well, but I also believe in a primal intelligence that is often pushed out by higher thought and over education. Perhaps it the idea promoted by Rousseau of the noble savage, perhaps it's just wishful thinking. But I promise you Marc isn't going to regret his new life in the end... so please keep reading! Jeep
Papa Werebear
10/25/19, 10:28 PM
Very HOT 🔥! Thanks again!
Boon
10/25/19, 10:14 PM
Such a promising start! please, make Bizarro play with the Superman uniform. Not just the shirt, but the cape, boots and trunks. It's like to debase the whole symbol of Superman, not just the hero or his name
Papa Werebear
10/25/19, 10:04 PM
H. P. Lovecraft. 😁 A young man goes to a decaying fishing village and discovers the inhabitants are hybrids of humans and Deep Ones (fish people who start out human looking and thinking, but over time evolve into dull brutish humanoid fish creatures). He tries to escape from the town, but they pursue him. He hides and passes out. When he awakes in the morning they're gone because they'd given up the search. He escapes, but over the years that follow he begins to change into one of them. He discovers he's related to the guy who started the cult of the Deep Ones and he's one of them. He wants to return and join them there's a yearning to join them, to fully transform and go to the underwater city. Honestly, I thought you were going for an homage to Shadow Over Innsmouth, but with werewolves. 😉 I'm intrigued by your writing and style. I love your characterizations, development, and the transformation. I love the degradation of the guy's language, and intelligence, it's well done, though why he's becoming "stupid" puzzles me; "perhaps it's part of the curse" I thought. Anyway, I'm eager to see what's going to happen! 🐻 Hugs! Papa
10/25/19, 10:03 PM
I mean...it isn't a diaper story.
Anonymous
10/25/19, 9:44 PM
so dislike diaper stories