Recent Comments

10/25/19, 2:43 PM
I have a Part 2 to this story mostly written, and you may have just given me the push I need to finish it, InappropriateBoi!
10/25/19, 2:24 PM
Love this story and all your work! Really like the father and son angle and would like to see that more often, especially if it's one converting the other!
Anonymous
10/25/19, 9:20 AM
You're such a creative and original storyteller, I can't wait to see where this goes!
10/25/19, 6:41 AM
lame? I damn well love this chapter, not lame at all
10/25/19, 6:29 AM
The idea is really good but it was boring at times and not as entertaining, the end thou was perfect
Feb 4, 2019
10/25/19, 6:27 AM
Rather long the opening and a tad confusing but the important part was great, would love for you to explore more the corrupted men
10/25/19, 6:26 AM
I find it a little bit ridiulous the "squeake" name and explanation but the story's good
Anonymous
10/25/19, 5:53 AM
very hot. i like what you wrote very much
10/25/19, 5:50 AM
I'm keeping this one for future use, really good one
Anonymous
10/25/19, 5:47 AM
Wow, an original idea for a change!