Recent Comments

10/25/19, 6:29 AM
The idea is really good but it was boring at times and not as entertaining, the end thou was perfect
Feb 4, 2019
10/25/19, 6:27 AM
Rather long the opening and a tad confusing but the important part was great, would love for you to explore more the corrupted men
10/25/19, 6:26 AM
I find it a little bit ridiulous the "squeake" name and explanation but the story's good
Anonymous
10/25/19, 5:53 AM
very hot. i like what you wrote very much
10/25/19, 5:50 AM
I'm keeping this one for future use, really good one
Anonymous
10/25/19, 5:47 AM
Wow, an original idea for a change!
Anonymous
10/25/19, 4:05 AM
I like it. Loved that the grubby bearded guys were his Dad and brothers. Excellent beginning.
nycboot
10/25/19, 2:38 AM
Whoa....great start!
Darkestlycan
10/25/19, 2:10 AM
Also thank you Martin for having such an open site for creative expression and not letting the every now and then person change what you believe in and what this site is about.
Darkestlycan
10/25/19, 2:07 AM
I am a Pup and I love both hypnosis and musk play (Plus more), and combined it's just amazing. How dare you come with such hate to any story on this site. What someone finds erotic is up to them. You don't know me and I don't know you. If you think the site is trash then you can leave. I'm sure without your negativity we will all be pretty much fine. This is a site for MC in its many creative forms. I for one would not want to see any stories removed just because "you" are offended. That is stifling creativity. What an author chooses to do with that forum is up to them. If you don't like it you don't have to read it. I don't see you writing anything, you're just coming here to read, just like I am. I am sure there was a moment where you were like this story isn't for me, and at that moment you could just find another one. Don't go bad mouthing the site because of your own issues. Now let's hope that is the end of that... though I doubt it. Like I said before the Musk and Raunchiness in this story is amazing I am very glad you chose to share it with us Kyle Chu keep it coming. It turns me on like you wouldn't believe I'm glad I found an author that gets me sexually. And thank you Brainiax for your help as well with the edits. And I can't wait for the last 2 steps of his 4 step plan. Keep it up I love it.