Recent Comments

Anonymous
10/25/19, 9:20 AM
You're such a creative and original storyteller, I can't wait to see where this goes!
10/25/19, 6:41 AM
lame? I damn well love this chapter, not lame at all
10/25/19, 6:29 AM
The idea is really good but it was boring at times and not as entertaining, the end thou was perfect
Feb 4, 2019
10/25/19, 6:27 AM
Rather long the opening and a tad confusing but the important part was great, would love for you to explore more the corrupted men
10/25/19, 6:26 AM
I find it a little bit ridiulous the "squeake" name and explanation but the story's good
Anonymous
10/25/19, 5:53 AM
very hot. i like what you wrote very much
10/25/19, 5:50 AM
I'm keeping this one for future use, really good one
Anonymous
10/25/19, 5:47 AM
Wow, an original idea for a change!
Anonymous
10/25/19, 4:05 AM
I like it. Loved that the grubby bearded guys were his Dad and brothers. Excellent beginning.
nycboot
10/25/19, 2:38 AM
Whoa....great start!