I'm glad I didn't disappoint you :3

A great addition to the story, well written as usual. Really hoping for some forced extreme obesity in the next chapter....

Loved this chapter -- really hope you continue this series on here, thanks for the consistently top-notch work.

I feel very sorry for the authors that the story has mostly been about this troll who clearly is just trying to garner some attention as opposed to actually talking about the story itself. I just wanted to say that I did like this story and I thought Kyle Chu and Brainiax did a good job. Keep up the good work, and I hope you keep posting stories in the future!

If we cant trust our weird, abnormal fetish sites for wholesome content, i don't know where the world is going...

Amazing work, Wesley.

I skimmed through the story quickly to find out what everyone was talking about, and honestly, I'm at a loss as to what the big deal is for the anonymous commenter. This is a fetish website, centered largely around the DS in BDSM. The fact that the other letters are coming into play is *hardly* surprising. As far as I can see, there's nothing kinkier to this story than a bit of raunch, which is a *huge* kink in the BDSM world. Anonymous commenter: you certainly do *not* have the "courage to voice put [sic] what others can’t say on this site". Firstly, if you can't put a name, you completely lack any courage whatsoever. Secondly, if you think that the story above has anything wrong with it at all, then I don't think you have a clue what goes through a very large number of kinkster's heads.

This is a really good story man! If this is just community service, I wonder what other people who commit crimes are turned into. I hope you keep writing, cuase this and your other series, Liberty are amazing!

I've waited so long for this particular chapter and i was not disappointed ♥️ can't wait to see what happens next

To the anon critic: First of all, why does the harshest critique (especially one targetted at me) always come from someone who doesn't even care enough to enter some name to refer to? It's not like you give *anything* away by entering some non-committal name in that field. However, I can see that you leave a lot of comments on the site, and almost all of them are quite constructive. So, you seem to come here a lot, you seem to be interested in our stories and the fact that you write a lot of comments is really appreciated (especially by the authors)! So I'll try not to take this one overboard comment too personal. In general, I'm not checking the quality of the stories. That's what the ratings are there for! It would be an immense work for me, if I'd have to qualify each story before I publish it. Also, it would mean endless discussions with the authors if their stories get denied. Only if a story doesn't adhere to our rules ([click this to read them](https://forum.gayspiralstories.com/t/submitting-your-story-to-gayspiralstories)) I will deny its publishing. That a story is simply so bad that I can't accept it, is extremely rare (it has happened though). I don't judge a story's contents. Fetishes and kinks are extremely varied, and just because *I* might not be aroused by a story doesn't mean that there aren't other who are. So as long as it fits on the site, it will be published. For this story this most certainly is the case. I can fully understand that you might find it disgusting, and one thing that was *not* ok with it, that there were certain tags missing, which can also serve as a warning. So I've just added the tags "piss", "filth" and "stink" myself. If you don't want to read such stories - and again, I can fully understand that - I recommend to add these to the tag filter on the main page. I'll try to be more careful about checking the tags, but to be honest, this is a job I just can't do by myself. That's why *everybody* can add and alter tags of any story! So, in the future, if you see a story which is missing important tags that could warn the hapless reader, just go ahead and add them yourself! I just want to add, that most readers seem to like this particular story, as its ratings are above average. - Martin