To the anon critic: First of all, why does the harshest critique (especially one targetted at me) always come from someone who doesn't even care enough to enter some name to refer to? It's not like you give *anything* away by entering some non-committal name in that field. However, I can see that you leave a lot of comments on the site, and almost all of them are quite constructive. So, you seem to come here a lot, you seem to be interested in our stories and the fact that you write a lot of comments is really appreciated (especially by the authors)! So I'll try not to take this one overboard comment too personal. In general, I'm not checking the quality of the stories. That's what the ratings are there for! It would be an immense work for me, if I'd have to qualify each story before I publish it. Also, it would mean endless discussions with the authors if their stories get denied. Only if a story doesn't adhere to our rules ([click this to read them](https://forum.gayspiralstories.com/t/submitting-your-story-to-gayspiralstories)) I will deny its publishing. That a story is simply so bad that I can't accept it, is extremely rare (it has happened though). I don't judge a story's contents. Fetishes and kinks are extremely varied, and just because *I* might not be aroused by a story doesn't mean that there aren't other who are. So as long as it fits on the site, it will be published. For this story this most certainly is the case. I can fully understand that you might find it disgusting, and one thing that was *not* ok with it, that there were certain tags missing, which can also serve as a warning. So I've just added the tags "piss", "filth" and "stink" myself. If you don't want to read such stories - and again, I can fully understand that - I recommend to add these to the tag filter on the main page. I'll try to be more careful about checking the tags, but to be honest, this is a job I just can't do by myself. That's why *everybody* can add and alter tags of any story! So, in the future, if you see a story which is missing important tags that could warn the hapless reader, just go ahead and add them yourself! I just want to add, that most readers seem to like this particular story, as its ratings are above average. - Martin

huuunngh. leo is my favorite. I'd love to see him as a total sub like you did with mowgli 😳

I'm so happy to see both Mutabear and KinkyPupEcho on here. After the chicanery with tumblr last year, I thought I wouldn't be able to find your work again. There was a good half year in which I checked your tumblrs every day. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future!

Interesting take on the were-person idea. You should explore this more. Perhaps someone has the opposite problem somewhere. Or other "cultured" people find their class position drop when the moon rises high.

Just because I have the courage to voice put what others can't say on this site and point out how awful the quality of stories have severely plummeted on this site, due to the horrendous stories that third rate authors like this one has published on this site doesn't mean that I'm a troll. The Gay Spiral does need to seriously clean up their archive with bullshit stories like this and I'm sorry to say that this story by far, is the worst offender I've seen. it does not belong here, and it needs to be removed before it begins to attract other trashy people on this site.

This was awesome! Please ignore the troll

As gay men, I would have thought that we would have learned early in life that the only way to be accepted is to accept others. How much more so is this true in the fetish world. Everybody has different fetishes, some of which could be considered pretty weird. But who is anyone to judge what is weird and what isn’t? I think this comes into play big time. Have you reread what you've written? "and that no one cares about their embarrassing fetishes except themselves" it really feels like you're targeting this author for some reason. There also is mind control in the story... you obviously just don't like the outcome of said mind control. I just wanted to point that out.

bulls and bears, now who is next? I'm looking fowords to

Really enjoyed this story, i hope there will be a follow up to it - as someone said there could have been more to to covertsion process but with the follow up Dave and Tyler are in bed when the maid comes in to clean up and does not recongise that they are her former husband and son, but just guests at the hotel and likewise they do not think of her any other way but the maid. anyways it seems there is still some unfinished buisness with the nephew

Really excited to see where this is going! Thanks for writing it, can't wait to see where it goes next.