Recent Comments

Anonymous
10/23/19, 12:11 PM
As gay men, I would have thought that we would have learned early in life that the only way to be accepted is to accept others. How much more so is this true in the fetish world. Everybody has different fetishes, some of which could be considered pretty weird. But who is anyone to judge what is weird and what isn’t? I think this comes into play big time. Have you reread what you've written? "and that no one cares about their embarrassing fetishes except themselves" it really feels like you're targeting this author for some reason. There also is mind control in the story... you obviously just don't like the outcome of said mind control. I just wanted to point that out.
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
10/23/19, 9:43 AM
bulls and bears, now who is next? I'm looking fowords to
malskin
10/23/19, 8:59 AM
Really enjoyed this story, i hope there will be a follow up to it - as someone said there could have been more to to covertsion process but with the follow up Dave and Tyler are in bed when the maid comes in to clean up and does not recongise that they are her former husband and son, but just guests at the hotel and likewise they do not think of her any other way but the maid. anyways it seems there is still some unfinished buisness with the nephew
10/23/19, 6:49 AM
Really excited to see where this is going! Thanks for writing it, can't wait to see where it goes next.
Ken
10/23/19, 6:28 AM
Thought it was a great story and fantasy. Ended kind of quickly. Could've added a couple chapters with dealing with the bullies.
Aug 12, 2018
Anonymous
10/23/19, 5:11 AM
hot story
Elm
10/23/19, 3:46 AM
Great story!
Anonymous
10/23/19, 2:49 AM
Awesome story! Super hot! Reminds me a lot of some of the older orrinx stuff - looks like it was a different author, but I hope you keep the story going! (Ignore the obvious troll)
10/23/19, 2:30 AM
I wrote the ending as I did mostly because I intended for this to be a one-shot but I think I *might* just write about the fate of the three other boys at some point. @Mutabear. W/regard to this not being in the same series as the other story, it shouldn't be. It's set in the same world, but is most definitely not a part of that story. @Heru Kane — Thank you so much for the praise! I love your work though I should probably be better about leaving comments... I'm a big worldbuilder so I often build a world before anything, and stories just naturally arise from that world.
nycboot
10/23/19, 2:29 AM
Great start! Looking forward to more!