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Anonymaus
11/24/24, 2:36 PM
This whole story & idea are just bad . Many Typos, & other errors in the story. "Artefacts"? what is that? Using AI is also the laziest way anyone can write a story. You had an idea and no imagination to write it yourself so you took the path of least resistance and used free AI to do the sloppy writing for yourself? Please delete this & all the lame AI generated stories from this site or at least clearly marking them so that users can know that guys are to lazy to come up with & write their own stories anymore. Utter garbage .

11/24/24, 3:02 PM
@Anonymaus I tagged the story "#ai created" and I included a note at the start explaining very clearly that this was created with an AI story generator. If you chose to ignore the tags and the very clearly made statement that prefaced the story then that's your problem, not mine. If you dont like AI generated stories, dont read them.

11/24/24, 10:53 PM
@Anonymaus I'll just second what Jamr said, and I'll also add: don't do this. Don't click on stories that are clearly tagged and marked as something you dislike, and then proceed to act like an asshole about it in the comments section. The site has a robust tagging and filtering option. You have been given many options for curating your reading experience. I encourage you to do so.
11/24/24, 9:07 PM
I'm shocked that there aren't any comments yet! This story is really good and I'm looking forward to what's to come. Now I have to go back and look at your other series.

11/24/24, 9:23 PM
@[HimboPup](/user/show/10011980) Thank you that's very kind. They'll slot together so you will see plenty of cross over characters. As to why there are not many comments, pass. But I only started writing them last month for the Halloween challenge maybe it takes awhile for readers to commit to reading longer more character driven stories and new writers to learn what the audience wants. Plus this one only went uo a few days ago :blush:
11/24/24, 8:28 PM
Ooh that was hot, and now have a recurring character. I hope his dynamic with Anthony get explored more.
11/24/24, 7:12 PM
Very hot!
11/24/24, 6:30 PM
What if you wrote a sudden upset? Our somewhat subby narrator managing to draw the game out longer?
11/24/24, 4:04 PM
How happy I was to discover a new series devoted to the dumb jock genre - it’s not everyday we have the pleasure to read stories like that and this one is very well written, congratulations! In fact, I loved how well you are hitting the tropes - I fucking love all the situations in which the main character gets his face pressed or shoved into the dumb jock’s crotch, feeling his big cock against his mouth. I absolutely love scenes like that and I literally can’t get enough of it. Sometimes I even think scenes like that, where sexual situations happen with crotches, cocks and asses getting shoved into faces, or the MC falling face down on a hot jock’s crotch are even hotter than the sex scenes. I loved how in the second chapter John just shoved his crotch into the MC’s face, and in this one his cock actually slipped from his briefs to slap him in the face. So hot, man! Please keep this scenes coming and never stop writing them, and it will be even better if other dumb, hung jocks end up pressing their crotches and cocks into MC’s face due to clumsiness, an accident or whatever reason. All that being said, I can’t wait to actually see how you will develop the actual sex scenes. The only criticism I have for your stories is that the chapters are too short for my tastes, because I want more, man!! I’m really really into this story and can’t stop thinking about all the different, creative, hot scenarios for those sexy dumb army jocks to fuck the hell out of MC, all the while being oblivious to their sexual prowess. Thanks so much for writing this and keep us fed with the daily chapters, you’re a champ for doing that. Cheers!

11/24/24, 6:14 PM
@[Elmara](/user/show/910352) Wow!! I'm very flattered that you're enjoying my writing and.. believe it or not.. I was actually considering sending you an email earlier today in appreciation of your work. :smiling_face_with_tear: Dumb Jock Roommate may be my most re-read story of all time and I'm obviously taking heavy inspiration from it! There's nothing that has made me feel quite like Jon and Theo together, ever, and I wish I really understood why. I think beyond the pure fantasy of it, you opened my eyes to a fascinating archetype of a relationship in which both parties participated with such enthusiasm and motivation (for their own reasons) that their interactions felt entirely plausible and real ...even if unlikely in real life. But what I loved the most was the playfulness in all their interactions and all the creative ideas which led to their eventual and unavoidable coupling which both were eager to have happen. I also really liked the ambiguity of the characters... Sometimes I would think that Jon was actually a genius and he did what he did because he perceived the other person to be attracted to him and an easy target, so he basically engineered these "accidents" which he knew would be tolerated by Theo so he could use him as a fleshlight whenever he felt like it without having himself appear gay ...or maybe he did all that subconsciously... In fact, I LOVE that their interactions are never perceived as gay romantic sex by Jon even though he is more eager to be around and (accidentally) insert himself in Theo than a newly wed mormon couple. Given all of that and more, theres a sense whenever they are fucking that this all is just an innocent play session gone wrong... which is just an insanely hot idea. I'm not even going to try to analyze why that is... With my story I'm attempting to lean a bit more towards "realism" wherein its not outright dicks slipping into holes (yet) but things that can be expected to happen, happen, but with a lucky gay nerd to witness them (or be otherwise affected by them). I think have some good ideas for how to escalate things in the next few chapters so I'm not going to keep edging everyone for much longer... though it may take me some time since I have to be back in class tomorrow... Cheers!
Cookiesgal
11/24/24, 4:00 PM
Really loved the story

11/24/24, 5:53 PM
@Cookiesgal Thank you Cookiesgal! 😁
bks2
11/24/24, 5:30 PM
Great work here—very cool ideas! Would love to see more with the Sandman.
11/24/24, 5:25 PM
Wow, that was awsome! Hope to see more of your works soon!

11/24/24, 5:29 PM
@[WhiteyPA](/user/show/10021235) Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it.
11/24/24, 4:37 PM
Fantastic story, and so very hot and imaginative. Excellent job. I hope we see more from you. You’re talented, and I like how you think.