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10/23/19, 2:30 AM
I wrote the ending as I did mostly because I intended for this to be a one-shot but I think I *might* just write about the fate of the three other boys at some point. @Mutabear. W/regard to this not being in the same series as the other story, it shouldn't be. It's set in the same world, but is most definitely not a part of that story. @Heru Kane — Thank you so much for the praise! I love your work though I should probably be better about leaving comments... I'm a big worldbuilder so I often build a world before anything, and stories just naturally arise from that world.
nycboot
10/23/19, 2:29 AM
Great start! Looking forward to more!
Anonymous
10/23/19, 2:23 AM
You are missing the bigger picture. Allowing stories like this to exist on this site encourages people to add more garbage stories in here. as a result, we are left with stories that barely have mind control in it. When I go to The Gay Spiral, I expect MIND CONTROL stories and not some lowlife's disgusting fantasies that is shoved onto my throat. It is not my job to filter what is mind control and what isnt because this site is supposed to only include stories that fits that category. Furthermore, all these stupid, so called "authors" have no respect towards the site and they have no clue that the pathetic piece of bullshit that they call "stories" dont even belong on this site and that no one cares about their embarrassing fetishes except themselves If they truly like to snort underwear or whatever, they should take their dumb, abhoreand start their own website. Just do all of us mind control fans a favor and stop cluttering this site's archive with your trash
Anonymous
10/23/19, 1:49 AM
Again dude, if you don't like it. Don't read it. There are plenty of other stories on here for you to read.
Anonymous
10/23/19, 1:36 AM
Man this is hot! I can't wait for more!
Anonymous
10/23/19, 12:55 AM
WTF?!?! This has nothing to do with the gay agenda. If people want to post their disgusting fetishes online, then they should post it on some other sit where other people give a fuck as opposed to trolling the people of this site whos trying to get off on erotic mind control but instead, gets trolled with garbage stories like this. As I stated multiple times, this author needs to wipe his face off of rhis site and he should go take his trashy stories somewhere else where people would actually appreciate instead of force feeding it on people like us who are here for the mind control stuff. Stop making excuses for such garbage authors, theres no room for them here
Anonymous
10/23/19, 12:35 AM
Great story, well written, would love to hear about Chris's first transformation and the adventures that Chris and Bob potentially get in the following month. Even if not, more redneck transformation stories of any sort would be appreciated
nycboot
10/23/19, 12:26 AM
As gay men, I would have thought that we would have learned early in life that the only way to be accepted is to accept others. How much more so is this true in the fetish world. Everybody has different fetishes, some of which could be considered pretty weird. But who is anyone to judge what is weird and what isn't? If you think the story needs to be removed, perhaps you should think deeply about what bothers you specifically (particularly when no one else seems to have a similar objection). It is a very typical Internet behavior that people complain that email lists and websites "aren't what they used to be" - when the author really means that the excitement they initially felt when discovering the email list/website has dissipated. The solution is either write the stories yourself, or find another venue that meets your needs. Verbally abusing the authors suggests some deeper conflict - which has nothing to do with the story or the authors.
10/22/19, 11:59 PM
So while at first I was like "why is the main made into the omega" but then at the end when his mind came back to him and it became less him a mindless slut and more a good mate, I was like "okay nifty." So all in all this was a very good, sexy, well written and developed story. Thumbs up on it. Also, its cool that its set in the same world as the other werewolf story you wrote.
Mutabear
10/22/19, 11:52 PM
The ending felt a little bit rushed. I would love to see the ideas post mating expanded upon, especially with how the other boys are dealt with.