Recent Comments

10/23/19, 6:49 AM
Really excited to see where this is going! Thanks for writing it, can't wait to see where it goes next.
Ken
10/23/19, 6:28 AM
Thought it was a great story and fantasy. Ended kind of quickly. Could've added a couple chapters with dealing with the bullies.
Aug 12, 2018
Anonymous
10/23/19, 5:11 AM
hot story
Elm
10/23/19, 3:46 AM
Great story!
Anonymous
10/23/19, 2:49 AM
Awesome story! Super hot! Reminds me a lot of some of the older orrinx stuff - looks like it was a different author, but I hope you keep the story going! (Ignore the obvious troll)
10/23/19, 2:30 AM
I wrote the ending as I did mostly because I intended for this to be a one-shot but I think I *might* just write about the fate of the three other boys at some point. @Mutabear. W/regard to this not being in the same series as the other story, it shouldn't be. It's set in the same world, but is most definitely not a part of that story. @Heru Kane — Thank you so much for the praise! I love your work though I should probably be better about leaving comments... I'm a big worldbuilder so I often build a world before anything, and stories just naturally arise from that world.
nycboot
10/23/19, 2:29 AM
Great start! Looking forward to more!
Anonymous
10/23/19, 2:23 AM
You are missing the bigger picture. Allowing stories like this to exist on this site encourages people to add more garbage stories in here. as a result, we are left with stories that barely have mind control in it. When I go to The Gay Spiral, I expect MIND CONTROL stories and not some lowlife's disgusting fantasies that is shoved onto my throat. It is not my job to filter what is mind control and what isnt because this site is supposed to only include stories that fits that category. Furthermore, all these stupid, so called "authors" have no respect towards the site and they have no clue that the pathetic piece of bullshit that they call "stories" dont even belong on this site and that no one cares about their embarrassing fetishes except themselves If they truly like to snort underwear or whatever, they should take their dumb, abhoreand start their own website. Just do all of us mind control fans a favor and stop cluttering this site's archive with your trash
Anonymous
10/23/19, 1:49 AM
Again dude, if you don't like it. Don't read it. There are plenty of other stories on here for you to read.
Anonymous
10/23/19, 1:36 AM
Man this is hot! I can't wait for more!