Recent Comments

Anonymous
10/22/19, 10:49 AM
im excited to see how far it can go. will he be able to get out of this, or will he eventually break down or be humiliated beyond belief? :P i love that hes aware through all of this. really turns me on.
Sexcrab
10/22/19, 8:33 AM
You're great writer, JoSmith. Definitely an inspiration to me who, at this moment, still rediscovering the art of writing (and no, I'm not being sarcastic because you write erotic stories). This are your third series and I must say I found impressive how you oscillate well between sensual moments (from touch to rough sex) and plot development. This story, as the others, is really great to follow (and cum, the biggest goal here). I want to find time to write a complete "review" of all of your stories, but english isn't my native language and I'm busy for now. Best wishes and continue writing, plz.
10/22/19, 5:36 AM
Oh I love this start. I can't wait to see what's next.
10/22/19, 5:01 AM
I love it <3 <3 <3 It was long but really worthy... I just want to read more about it :3 And I also like the new character Leo... if Sam don't want him, I take him * ⁄ ⁄ ω ⁄ ⁄ *
Anonymous
10/22/19, 4:27 AM
Clever. I enjoyed it.
Anonymous
10/22/19, 4:23 AM
Awesome. One of my new favorites. I hope you have a sequel with Chris or maybe them turning themselves into a pack of rednecks. Fuck the idea is a super hard on.
Anonymous
10/22/19, 4:11 AM
my favorite!!
10/22/19, 3:40 AM
I'm happy y'all have been so gracious with me and this series. When I write, it's more so, word-vomit and a stream of consciousness that doesn't really have an end in sight. During the writing process, I literally just type and hope that it makes sense and I leave it alone for a while and then come back to it and begin to edit when I have free time. This series has been in my drafts along with four other stories for a long time, marinating themselves in hopes that when I revisit them, they'll be semi-readable. Thanks again for being supporting with the way that this series has been going so far. Also, yeah, this chapter was super long and not a traditional 'pay off' in terms of wank material. Not intentional on my part but I like that it's similar to how Butch may be feeling having blue balls and leaving the room without his own 'pay off.' #Meta
Anonymous
10/22/19, 3:35 AM
An evil scientist narrative is my favorite. Thank you!!
10/22/19, 3:27 AM
Honestly, while I get that this is a community series I hope you continue your own version without worrying so much about the community aspect. Mostly because I like where you personally are going with it and I think it could be fun if you carry along in the direction you wish. That said, yeah, Sam being with three others (in a group relationship) sounds fun, especially of the two brothers of people in said relationship are also in a relationship and then have fun with the group every once and a while as well. Fun sexy times to be had. hehe The whole girlfriend thing wouldn't, really shouldn't in my opinion, take up too much space. Just a few lines or a scene or two and there you go, one of them is now dominant over the other. hehe (Heck, depending on who the one gf slept with said guy could totally be made into a subby slutty good boy for the group. Just sayin. Maybe they need a pet. lol) On behavior, I can see a bit of Sam going a bit more subby, hence my request. Personally, for me, I like my protagonist (especially in the case where he has some sort of hypno device) being the one in charge. It being a nice leisurely and romantic, but also sexy, story is one of the reasons why I like it. The others are cool in various ways as well but there was something nifty about this. (I wasn't so much a fan of some of the others where others took control of the Amulet, I want our main guy to have it.)