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ForgottenCradle
10/21/19, 2:42 PM
oooh,this is a nice twist. I'm a fan of Sam changing them without him realizing it,too great chapter
ForgottenCradle
10/21/19, 1:58 PM
awwwww,poor Butch has feelings for Aaron. I really like this story
10/21/19, 12:50 PM
Totally hot! Can't wait for the next chapter.
10/21/19, 11:30 AM
Thanks, my dear anon :3
Anonymous
10/21/19, 11:23 AM
Now this is **great**!
TcomJ
10/21/19, 8:37 AM
The previous series thrown in surprised plenty of time, but the timeline is not completely out of loop like this nor somehow so random outside of theme suddenly add in out of nowhere. Whether I will read this further or not has nothing to do with the fact that you cant take slightest of criticism when you asked for one. The original writer of this series literally have timeline for every characters from a gym dude, a motel owner, a mortorcycle driver, FBI agent, a pair of brothers and their dad, school people, etc and all have their sensible timeline. This one you just well, you just want to get to rubber drone soldier out of nowhere because you want to.
Anonymous
10/21/19, 6:57 AM
i just think you need to wait until you have more. but very hot story so far the premise is actually pretty original
10/21/19, 3:01 AM
This was a great start. I can't wait to read more.
Anonymous
10/21/19, 2:54 AM
Really good, it's a power ranger's reference with just a enough erotic content to wet appetites. I remember the original Green Ranger saga and how Rita had mind controlled Tommy, I didn't know it as a kid, but that was my first taste of MC fiction
Oct 19, 2019
firesix
10/21/19, 2:18 AM
I always adore your stories... you write nothing but hits every time.