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11/24/24, 9:42 AM
A great continuation. I can't wait to see what else the AI does with what it's learned.
Nov 22, 2024
11/24/24, 8:42 AM
Just joining in the chorus saying this was AMAZING. As @Hypnothrill said, you do an amazing job with the dreamlike quality of the story--the fact that Sam doesn't recognize Marshall's clothing until after they've spoken a while, the sudden appearance of other characters (when Sam enters he mentions that the gym isn't full, but by the shower scene there are lots of guys), and the weird flow of time in the space in general adds something extra special. Plus there's something to be said for instant-conversion stories: I love a good long resistance/brainwashing period, but sometimes it's amazing to watch someone just instantly fall under the spell. Fantastic job. :)
11/24/24, 8:01 AM
Love the writing.

11/24/24, 8:32 AM
@Flamefox23 :heart: I rewrote sentences so many times...
MikeinLB68
11/24/24, 5:35 AM
This was a surprise in that the description of the hypnosis experience was well developed and executed. You really translated what is tough to put into real words into real words. I like that the exploration of the going and being undet wasnt dragged out, but instead filled up with understandable narrative. You captured a good voice of somewhat skeptical but who had a very believable reason of "going along with it". And the post sex narrative was very authentic. Good job.
11/23/24, 11:00 PM
Very nice - one of the better and more interesting stories I've come across here in a while.
11/23/24, 10:20 PM
That ending is so good.
11/23/24, 9:39 PM
May we have some more please, sir? Excellent story!
11/23/24, 9:05 PM
Just YES! It's perfect!! We need more of this~
Anonymous
11/23/24, 8:59 PM
I’m VERY happy to see this series return!! It’s one of my favorites of yours :3
Jun 18, 2019
Lune
11/23/24, 8:47 PM
I dream of a story focused on The Pupp.. I mean Poppies >w< Wonderful story!