Recent Comments

Anonymous
10/20/19, 6:20 PM
Can we get a transformation of a cute young white guy getting turned into a fat hairy Indian turbaned Sikh man
10/20/19, 6:14 PM
I'm a sucker for "supervillain slowly corrupts hero team" stories, and the way that Sam gave himself up because of his crush just made it better.
10/20/19, 6:02 PM
This was really hot
TcomJ
10/20/19, 5:17 PM
the problem wasn't that I didnt read chapter 4. I already read the whole series and I didnt have a problem until this chapter. You skip the time from Chapter 4 where the truck driver with the kid then just jump all the way to rubber soldier being introduced and the driver is on the run from them out of nowhere. There was no foreshadowing or anything of sort. It feels like it was so needed to be add in asap because well just wanting to do it.
10/20/19, 4:28 PM
Really would love to see more of this! Very hot!
mattbarradell@hotmail.co.uk
10/20/19, 4:00 PM
thank you again for the feedback, it's honestly keeping me going and I'm loving writing again! Just submitted Part V!
SirD
10/20/19, 1:50 PM
i like the way this is going. can think of several things that can happen next with Tom.
SirD
10/20/19, 1:43 PM
Just like everyone who already commented, i loved the story and cant wait for chapter 2
Ruffcub
10/20/19, 8:50 AM
I've always loved your stories so it's great to see you posting again. Hope there's another part soon!
Jul 23, 2019
Anonymous
10/20/19, 7:52 AM
A great story. I would love you to write one about a straight handsome young college sports guy, who is also a bit shy. His penis only average but worked on by an ugly guy and a middle aged woman or other females people he would never normally let see him. kidnapped or something totally humiliated pubes changed