Recent Comments

10/20/19, 6:02 PM
This was really hot
TcomJ
10/20/19, 5:17 PM
the problem wasn't that I didnt read chapter 4. I already read the whole series and I didnt have a problem until this chapter. You skip the time from Chapter 4 where the truck driver with the kid then just jump all the way to rubber soldier being introduced and the driver is on the run from them out of nowhere. There was no foreshadowing or anything of sort. It feels like it was so needed to be add in asap because well just wanting to do it.
10/20/19, 4:28 PM
Really would love to see more of this! Very hot!
mattbarradell@hotmail.co.uk
10/20/19, 4:00 PM
thank you again for the feedback, it's honestly keeping me going and I'm loving writing again! Just submitted Part V!
SirD
10/20/19, 1:50 PM
i like the way this is going. can think of several things that can happen next with Tom.
SirD
10/20/19, 1:43 PM
Just like everyone who already commented, i loved the story and cant wait for chapter 2
Ruffcub
10/20/19, 8:50 AM
I've always loved your stories so it's great to see you posting again. Hope there's another part soon!
Jul 23, 2019
Anonymous
10/20/19, 7:52 AM
A great story. I would love you to write one about a straight handsome young college sports guy, who is also a bit shy. His penis only average but worked on by an ugly guy and a middle aged woman or other females people he would never normally let see him. kidnapped or something totally humiliated pubes changed
bigfan
10/20/19, 7:08 AM
this whole series speaks to my turn ons so much in terms of masc-fem contrast, not to mention that you have quality non-cringe writing which is what normally distracts me with online stories like this. Amazing! (p.s One thing I might like in the future would be to add a little more attention to the feminization transformation in a parker-like character. I actually wasn't 100% sure if he was transforming at some points? I feel bad even writing this because I really just wanted to comment in how awesome and inventive your work is but figure I'd throw it out there! keep it up!)
Oct 13, 2019
10/20/19, 6:23 AM
I was a fan of your work when you first started posting erotic stories. Loved the Pizza series and I'm glad your'e continuing again. I would love to see the other characters back at work again!