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10/18/19, 11:44 AM
I'm embarrassed to say that I did not get it or what was going on with this chapter. It was really raised giving the audience and the format and said he actually write a kind of characterization as opposed to just set up obvious strawman. okay I guess technically he did that. But the real point is that I actually enjoyed reading this or more turning listen to an audiobook and listening and getting the field for the character and their ideas and the setup. It was simple but fun and I got a sense that there was a tease to the whole thing as well as plenty of characterization . however primarily this chapter is setup but with a good hint at the end I can't say that I liked it but it did make me want to read on and then I liked what was coming so over all this story is really fun and solid it's also feels in a way different . it's hard to say but it's like a style or circumstance I don't feel over exposed to . That's this isn't two people immediately fall in love so much as a couple enjoying wild circumstances together which makes things kind of fun . it's at the very least different from my normal expectation which I suppose tells us that yes focus groups and accepting feedback can in fact have positive outcomes for something that's a lot of the same but fresh different
10/18/19, 9:07 AM
Thanks, guys! Hehe. I've _been_ on a bit of a sci-fi kick lately and wanted to see where I could take this. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
malskin
10/18/19, 6:56 AM
with life i somehow missed this series but i have binged read it - rubbersome its really good. like how guys re being infected and the seed it growing. looking forward to read how the 2 cops are going to be recycled
Anonymous
10/18/19, 5:32 AM
I mean it's Chaoticdjinn. The midpoint is where they're compromised but satisfied, then the ending disturbs that satisfaction. Dollars to donuts it ends with Connor posturing and offhandedly wishing he could make it with a chick, he ends up straight and Taylor is left pining.
Anonymous
10/18/19, 4:04 AM
I'm intrigued.
10/18/19, 3:50 AM
PupScout Thank you for the praise. I hope the mental image of rubber electrified drones was better than the female bridal party.
10/18/19, 2:31 AM
I loved this chapter. Every aspect. I had to pee and I was hungry, but I couldn't get up, I just had to read on. As for your comment on haka. I used to love the haka, then I saw a bridal party do it at a wedding and I was completely done with it. Ruined forever.
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10/18/19, 2:22 AM
I hope Jordan wears diapers from the voodoo doll.
Anonymous
10/18/19, 2:21 AM
i like it will you make him a dog and will the ex boyfriend show up
Anonymous
10/17/19, 11:56 PM
Keep coming back to this hoping for more. Great series!