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11/24/24, 4:37 PM
Fantastic story, and so very hot and imaginative. Excellent job. I hope we see more from you. You’re talented, and I like how you think.
gdlosh13@gmail.com
11/24/24, 3:24 PM
I would love this to happen to me.
Anonymous
11/24/24, 2:56 PM
Mr Ross is such a great boss. Hot too!
11/24/24, 1:26 PM
Every entry in the 'New Crop' series is just such a treat. The way they almost never realise what's happening and just keep falling deeper into their melon-y fate.
Tranceguy
11/24/24, 1:05 PM
Great story man! I like this kind of mind control. And I like the way you do it with James. A good hypnosis can't be fast, it takes time! I will read the continuation as soon as possible for me. Thanks for this today I'm aroused now. ;-)
11/24/24, 12:54 PM
Love this one so much. Still wonder exactly how that party later on would have turned out.
11/24/24, 9:42 AM
A great continuation. I can't wait to see what else the AI does with what it's learned.
Nov 22, 2024
11/24/24, 8:42 AM
Just joining in the chorus saying this was AMAZING. As @Hypnothrill said, you do an amazing job with the dreamlike quality of the story--the fact that Sam doesn't recognize Marshall's clothing until after they've spoken a while, the sudden appearance of other characters (when Sam enters he mentions that the gym isn't full, but by the shower scene there are lots of guys), and the weird flow of time in the space in general adds something extra special. Plus there's something to be said for instant-conversion stories: I love a good long resistance/brainwashing period, but sometimes it's amazing to watch someone just instantly fall under the spell. Fantastic job. :)
11/24/24, 8:01 AM
Love the writing.

11/24/24, 8:32 AM
@Flamefox23 :heart: I rewrote sentences so many times...
MikeinLB68
11/24/24, 5:35 AM
This was a surprise in that the description of the hypnosis experience was well developed and executed. You really translated what is tough to put into real words into real words. I like that the exploration of the going and being undet wasnt dragged out, but instead filled up with understandable narrative. You captured a good voice of somewhat skeptical but who had a very believable reason of "going along with it". And the post sex narrative was very authentic. Good job.