Recent Comments

Anonymous
10/16/19, 7:25 PM
This was super hot! The story and worldbuilding was really enjoyable and super well done. I'm so excited for the next one
Anonymous
10/16/19, 6:49 PM
soooo awesome!
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10/16/19, 5:42 PM
This was super hot! The story and worldbuilding was really enjoyable and super well done, and the idea of people being slipped into bodies that have their own needs and limitations is a sexy one, with a lot of potential. I liked the gradual transformation too. Made it a lot more fun and enjoyable to read. If you took up this premise again with a later story, it might be fun to see several sex scenes, all at different stages of the person gradually adapting to their new body. That could be a fun way to really explore how much they're giving in to the new body's needs. Either way: bravo, this was really good!
nycboot
10/16/19, 5:30 PM
Good luck on the move, rubbrsome. As to the story I have to compliment you (I guess as usual). Most of the stories on this site consist of a continuous arc moving to the inevitable - perhaps with a twist here and there. But you have increased the amazing tension by creating this encounter of Ken and the boy - and his mother. Looking at the next chapter, we all realize that it was just a warm-up for the major encounter in chapter 6. As always, bravo!!
Anonymous
10/16/19, 1:55 PM
Some ass expansion would be nice in a future story
Anonymous
10/16/19, 10:03 AM
i love this series actually any hidden control
ForgottenCradle
10/16/19, 8:22 AM
the story was amazing,btw. very well thought out and written
malskin
10/16/19, 7:17 AM
i am still hoping that Dick becomes an improved normal (gay) Police Officer again in his new tight leather uniform, of course still getting disciplined by Chief Beavers
ForgottenCradle
10/16/19, 7:08 AM
oof,that was raunchy. I loved it
10/16/19, 6:55 AM
Well, next time I open up for commissions, you can always put your money where your big mouth is fella. I write what I enjoy--and I'm hardly the only writer around here whose stories have a common theme. Grow up--if you want to see something different, write it yourself, or fucking pay for it. The guy who commissioned this story knew what he wanted, and he's plenty happy with it, and was happy to pay for it. Guess that means this one was never meant for you in the first place. Move the fuck on.