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Anonymous
10/16/19, 10:03 AM
i love this series actually any hidden control
ForgottenCradle
10/16/19, 8:22 AM
the story was amazing,btw. very well thought out and written
malskin
10/16/19, 7:17 AM
i am still hoping that Dick becomes an improved normal (gay) Police Officer again in his new tight leather uniform, of course still getting disciplined by Chief Beavers
ForgottenCradle
10/16/19, 7:08 AM
oof,that was raunchy. I loved it
10/16/19, 6:55 AM
Well, next time I open up for commissions, you can always put your money where your big mouth is fella. I write what I enjoy--and I'm hardly the only writer around here whose stories have a common theme. Grow up--if you want to see something different, write it yourself, or fucking pay for it. The guy who commissioned this story knew what he wanted, and he's plenty happy with it, and was happy to pay for it. Guess that means this one was never meant for you in the first place. Move the fuck on.
Anonymous
10/16/19, 4:45 AM
*That's Wesley's thing: the guy always loses.* Yeah fanboy, that's exactly it. Wesley is a really good writer, very detailed, lots of story build, and all that. He's technically very good. It's just the same plot. It's always more of the same. I took a break from reading his stories for a couple of years and now I come back to find there has been no growth, no change. Guy gets twisted into a slob, shit eater, pig, demon, toilet, rubber drone, rubber toilet, demon pig, sob demon drone, rubber shit eater - whatever - through, wait, let me guess 'DARKNESS he can't possibly overcome! Ooooooo!' No one wins against 'Oooooo! DARKNESS! Ooooo!' Yeah - wash, rinse, repeat, or in this case, don't wash, get greasy and stinky, repeat. You can predict what the next story is going to be by skimming the last one. And mean spirited? When is being truthful mean spirited? Tell me the stories AREN'T all the same, tell me it ISN'T the truth and THEN I'll believe you have claim to 'mean spirited'.
10/16/19, 3:34 AM
This story is awesome. Hits all the right notes for me. Dumb hot jock transformation, authority figure with a huge cock, reality warping, and muscle. Can’t wait to read more, if it happens. The rest has been just as hot as this first chapter.
Anonymous
10/16/19, 3:32 AM
I find the previous comment gratuitous and unnecessarily mean spirited. If you dont like his works, skip them. You don't develop or contribute by nastiness. Yes, it's the same but well written and passionate. Why don't you add your own name so we can see what fine works you've contributed.
10/16/19, 3:27 AM
That’s funny from the guy above me. If it’s always the same, why do you read it? That’s Wesley’s thing: the guy always loses. I think it’s super hot! The way Kyle transforms, the way he struggles, and ultimately how he is forced to submit to the boss. All mega hot.
Anonymous
10/16/19, 12:40 AM
More of the same torture porn we always see from this author. Kyle would have been more intriguing if he had won. Instead we get the same old story we've seen, over and over and over again - pigs and demons and torture - ho hum. Do something interesting that isn't this. This is past getting old and is now rather expected from you.