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jeep4191@gmail.com
10/15/19, 1:44 AM
Stormbound, It's my feeling that eventually unit Dan will get used to the body, and learn not to mind being the ultimate leather daddy in a world full of gay archetypes. I think, in part that he despises the carelessness with which Declan originally decided on it in the time before. Part of the reason that the ending took so long was the fact that I tried many ways to end it with returning unit Dan to unit 7, and still having Declan defeated, but none of them worked... the only way that Eden continues to work is with the leadership of the Great Leader, and the only person who could take over was unit Dan in the guise of the Great Leader. You will notice that even as Dan came back to himself he still speaks of himself as a unit, all the inhabitants of the society are a part of the whole, they are not, and never can be wholly individuals again, the conversion process has assured that, so perhaps in the future there is still hope for unit Great Leader to truly be all that a great leader should be... sorry for the ramble, but i have many ideas yet unexplored in this story concept, and the could be a sequel or prequel at some point...
10/15/19, 1:24 AM
Nice solid conclusion. It's too bad Unit Dan/7 is stuck in a body it despises so much. I guess the nanobots can no longer reprogram it the way they could Unit 8? Speaking of which Unit 8 got what it deserves, that such a creature thought it could lead the great society is silly. The unit 1s could use some reformatting if possible as well to have a form less like the one Unit 8 originally had. Unit Dan is lucky it was able to spend some time as Unit 7, that form is so perfectly balanced and pure
10/15/19, 12:28 AM
WoW! I love your narrative style! :3 Great story!
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
10/14/19, 10:07 PM
also, how will it ending? I mean I really want to see more of the police, firemen and also the Mayor and the City council
Oct 13, 2019
Speaks
10/14/19, 10:03 PM
great to see you writing again more please..
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
10/14/19, 9:33 PM
so cool, I hope the ending is as good as the whole story
Caboose
10/14/19, 9:13 PM
I love seeing athletes turn into chubby, cock taking pigs.
10/14/19, 9:11 PM
Thanks Absman420 I'm really trying to do you proud and stay true to what you started. I'm also trying to make this fun. I throw in some crazy imagery, i.e. the electrified team of rubber drones. I hope I'm not straying too far or too overboard.
Oct 13, 2019
Anonymous
10/14/19, 9:01 PM
I missed this series so much! Im glad you're continuing it. Cant wait to see tommy and sam!
10/14/19, 8:58 PM
TcomJ I'm not sure why it was so confusing. This chapter is a direct continuation of last chapter, detailing what happened to Ken Chaffey after he left the gas station. For this story, simply read Chapter 4. One of the aspects that I enjoyed from Absman's original Pollination series was the ensemble, nationwide scope of the story. As the men pollinated one another, they spread out. And the story would jump from character to character, giving small story snippets. It made the story feel as it had an epic scope. And I intend to do that here. I'm just getting started. I have many many more characters to introduce.